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| Mary-La 2008-07-16 ch 6,  | abuseAWESOMENESS! I love blood and chocolate... Please continue! I love it! P.S. : I dont mind being your beta reader... |
| BriAnna 2008-07-10 ch 6, anon. | abuseFor a first story, your really good. I like reading your story and hope to have more to read after summer.Have a very good summer! |
| wolfgirlblack 2008-07-08 ch 6, | abuseokay, i think the story line's pretty good, but there are alot of spelling errors, which make even a good story seem bad. and everyone seems to be getting out of character alot, too... |
| Jo 2008-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abusebook sucks end of story! movie rocked! |
| Smile for Life 2008-05-27 ch 2, | abuseNice ^^ U P D A T E S O O N ! |
| Smile for Life 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseIt's a bit too much like the original book... U P D A T E S O O N. |
| bookworm2009 2008-05-27 ch 6, | abusei love this story...hope you update soon |
| RebelDiamond 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseThis might have been good...I couldn't tell because I was too bust cringing at the spelling errors...are you foreign or something? Because I'm pretty sure EVERYONE knows how to spell some of the words that you mispelled. I couldn't finish it...it was annoying. You asked for brutal honey. |
| PrincessDestinee 2008-05-25 ch 6, anon. | abuseHey Girl, Don't worry, your story is awesome! ^-^ I like it very much. Have a lot of fun during your summer vacation! Greets! Dessy a.k.a PrincessDestinee |
| Tilting At Windmills 2008-05-24 ch 5, | abuseHi, Please update soon. Your chapters and ideas are good; but you could work on grammar and such. |
| Big Bad WOlf gRl 2008-05-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseYou need spell check. *worshiping on the ground* Spell check will do you a lot of good. Like help you spell "fibber" right. And this was a little awkward. Lets not mention that both of these characters are acting funny. This fanfiction just kinda sucked. A lot. |
| Angelea Baird 2008-05-12 ch 5, anon. | abusePlezz make another chapter! I love it :) |
| Love For Secrets 2008-04-27 ch 5, | abuseI likes it i likes it a lot I think that you should not make her el-prego i think it should be a total false alarm and make Vivian rub it in Esme's face that she was right that would be cool ok, that would be very rude' but still Thanks for writing this it's good ~Sarah~ |
| esmi25 2008-04-26 ch 5, | abuseplease update |
| Diespedes 2008-04-22 ch 5, | abuseYou are a really good writer, and I love how you more or less keep in character, but this is spoilt by your incorrect use of words eg. collage should be college, braw --> bra ect. Proof reading would help. Otherwise keep up the good work :) |