Adah. Adahgasodfh23405398t. (bubbles incoherently) WOW. (I guessed the pairings, by the way.) But wow, wowow. YOU. (pokes) You and your TWISTS! You and your... your unexpected turn of events! YOU! (wanders off babbling)

Aw that was so sad! Darkshipping is just impossible isn't it... i kinda like that pairing for that. The story just makes you expect Bakura to bring Yami back or something.

Bakura cares for Ryou!

ehh which kana are we refering to now haha.

- maybe I should have kept the name LonelyGirl1506?

HI Shadow,

At first when I was reading I didn't know who the pairings were but I begun putting two and two together. I found a third as well.

A dark Bakura... I never thought of that and he takes over Yami's body because the lighter Bakura loves him, and not.

He asks for a kiss but asks the darker side of himself to close his eyes.

Poor Yami coulda saved himself if he just admitted he loved light Bakura. Now he is adrift once again. He will need to head back to the puzzle and tell Yugi what is going on.

I feel this could become a many chaptered story. At least write a few more.

What happens to Yami? and so on...Bye til, U write .

(backs up and runs head first into the computer, trying to hug Shadow-kun)...(hits her own face) THANK YOU! (sniffle) I needed this SO bad - Its cold, I'm miserable, and I only have the Lord of the Ring movies to keep me going (Shake it Legolas, shake it X3)

That was teh SPIFFIEST. Poor Baku (hugs Bakura and watches him melt from all the LUV)...(hugs Toukoku instead - he's a little more durable) And...Touzoku in YAMI'S body! (dies laughing and then hugs Yami) I'm all HUGY today. A Pseudo-Yami!

Is it Christmas yet? WHAT! NINE DAYS? NINE!1! Your Christmas present is going along fine...-_O It is giving me trouble, mocking me and my Original Story Writer's Block (which just SCUKS)

With Love, Kana-kun

It's a good story. I know short reviews suck. And people should discuss the merits and demerits of stories. *shrugs* But who cares if the overall effect is good? Which it is. Au revoir