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Reviews For: The discovery

BubblesBoo
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abusei loved it :)
ash and misty are such a cute couple!
KengoGirl
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuseAww! So cute! And I love that song! That was very creative!
prettygirl17
2008-01-09
ch 1,
abuseIt was great! I loved how it ended. Perfect.

This may sound strange, but I actually liked how you wrote the part where Misty and Ash fell down. Usually you could imagine the position they would automatically fall down in so when it was different my automatic reaction was that you're a very originial and creative writer. Loved it!
EVAN AAML
2007-12-16
ch 1,
abuseAh, a great one-shot/song-fic! I love Misty's song, it's one of the nest songs to chose for a song-fic. You did a great job on this story, looking forward to anything else you have in store!

sincerely,
evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML
KaterinaBeloved
2007-12-16
ch 1,
abuseOHH!! I love Brock's character in these kinds of stories!!
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