 Sapphire Gardevoir and Star Enfinity 12/7/04 . chapter 1I liked it! So many people write about him like he's an idiot. I know he seems like it but I think he's just havin' fun. I mean when he fights he gets all smart and serious. |
 Ravenpan 2/16/04 . chapter 1It's so nice to see someone writing Goku this way - too many people portray his 'baka' side, and forget he's got a serious one too. excellent story! |
 Leovinia 9/9/01 . chapter 1A very well written story. |
 alice 9/8/01 . chapter 1 Bravo! It's so cute. |
 brc87 9/8/01 . chapter 1that was good. |
 Android 188 9/7/01 . chapter 1the last one. |
 Neo Kei 9/7/01 . chapter 1That was so sweet. I really liked this fic a lot. I hope you write more. |
 Senaca 9/7/01 . chapter 1 Very sweet. |
 DBZfemmefreak 9/7/01 . chapter 1 I really liked it. You are very good, but you made some errors. Keep up the good work. |
 Jedi Vegeta 9/7/01 . chapter 1Very...Very...Good. I thought is was well writen and a well thought out story. Lately, we have not gotten much of those. I loved the beginning, FYI :) Keep it up! -Jodi |
 Surreptitious Chi X 9/7/01 . chapter 1Can't tell you. I know you want to know how you did, and I can't tell you. I don't know if anyone else has the feeling I have, but I can't put it into words. The best thing that I can say is that it was good, not bad. |
 Seraphsaiyan 9/7/01 . chapter 1 Cool story! I loved it. |
 CoyKoi 9/7/01 . chapter 1Awww. . . so sweet! I loved the other one, too. |
 Lady Nightshade 9/7/01 . chapter 1this was interueing |
 MitsuiJr 9/4/01 . chapter 1_
goku rulz |