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Susan Hillwig
2009-07-12 . chapter 16
Oh, this last one was great! Don't have kids myself, but I did once have an awkward conversaion with my nephew while watching Star Wars regarding all the Jawas that the stormtroopers killed.

Okay, I'm up to date on the drabbles now...write more! :)
Susan Hillwig
2009-07-12 . chapter 10
All these drabbles have been great so far, but I wanted to leave special comment on this one. Scars are something that rarely get mentioned in regard to superheroes, unless it's an "in-story" thing (like when Bats was examining Ollie's body after he came back), so to base a whole story around such a thing is rather unique. As someone whose fave hero is reknowned for his scars (Jonah Hex, who else?) I have a real appreciation for this piece.
nova87
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
Cute story about the stranger at the door. Who would believe a clean shave Ollie. Poor Lian she had seen his goatee her who life up until that moment. I laugh as I read this. Looking forward to reading the next chapter in this series.
LizfromItaly
2008-10-26 . chapter 15
so... First, I really like your story, 'cause I'm a HUGE FAN of the whole team arrow. second... well, we're on the same line... CONNOR/Mia? nothing best! (and a couple of comics of the OYL, IMHO, suggested that idea...) Third... where's Roy? I need Roy! i want Roy! keeps going on with this very nice work!
TomGS
2008-10-25 . chapter 15
I like these stories. but the first 13 where way better.

the last 2 where... i dont know... out of the blue? ...

i hate being latinamerican, sometimes... for example when i have to write in inglish... arrg!!

hehehe...

no, seriously, i do love how you write, but the last 2 where kind of vague... like reading a diary of sombady you dont know...or ever heard of. the last one whas like evasdroping a conversation in the cue for the danceclub... perhaps a litle "scenery" touches? i dunno... you are the writer! ;)

aniway, keep it up!! I'll be reading every thing you trhow this way.

cheers, Tom.
Kim *Gottaluvit*
2008-10-23 . chapter 15
VBG. Lol, so many fans get confused with Connor and Conner..I can imagine Cassie and Mia having a conversation like this, this made me grin from ear to ear.
Matt the Batman Fan
2008-09-07 . chapter 14
Well, I personally think that putting a woman with an immunodeficiency problem in as physically taxing a position as superhero is concerned isn't exactly the best way to be a good father but, on the other hand, Ollie's allowing Mia to do what she wants to do with the time she has left and that's to be commended. I think Mia is a little too hard-nosed to feel too bad about Ollie dwelling on the past but I did like how you presented it.
Hephaestus01
2008-08-18 . chapter 14
Interesting vignettes. Good job, they were very enjoyable, especially the flight one.
Rouge-Phoenix
2008-08-12 . chapter 14
i really am watching out for updates on this one. i love your writing style for this. your ideas for mia are really great too. don't stop.
Allronix
2008-06-15 . chapter 12
thank you for these stories. Connor is a very hard character to write (I play him in an online RP, and it's not been easy), so I appreciated some good stories with his POV.

I also adore Ollie in all his loudmouthed, liberal, flawed glory. I started with the Kevin Smith run, and have been digging through used shops for the Grell-era stuf.
Rouge-Phoenix
2008-05-28 . chapter 12
i've been following this one since you first posted it and i have to say i'm loving it. at the end of every chapter i'm left with this funny smile on my face and a green arrow muse running half naked and yelling in my head. the only down side for me so far is that i'd like to see a little more of mia, i started reading green arrow for her and immedtially got addicted, before that i was a bat fan (and still am.) anyway just wanted to say, nice job and keep em coming.
nyxie9
2008-05-24 . chapter 12
I just loved this story. Nothing better than a warm and fuzzy Connor story!
Gottaluvit
2008-02-21 . chapter 10
WOW, that was powerful and beautiful! So poingnant I had tears forming.

Very nice job!

Oh..Roy Toy's archive would love to have this posted there. if you're interested.

Again, wonderful work!
Gottaluvit
2008-02-04 . chapter 9
Lovely vignette from Dinah's P.O.V. I love the references to Ollie's boy's. Yes technically Roy is supposed to have blue eyes, but he's usually drawn with green and most fan fic writers stick to green.

a little romantic arrow fluff was just the thing I needed today. thank you.
Gottaluvit
2008-01-02 . chapter 4
Wonderful work! I enjoyed every one of these, the voices sounded just right.

I had trouble reading the last two, kept getting an error message, so I'm very glad you sent me a PM with them, because they were awsome.

There aren't enough Team Arrow fan fic writers around so it's a delight to find drabbles as wonderful as these. Thank you so much!
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