I like the story - The whole forbbiden love but it's got too cheesy for my taste a tickle fight really? xD) idk its just I cant see Zuko having a tickle fight it's OOC anyhow it started of great but then it got cheesy

THAT-WAS-AWSOME

I absolutely love this! Great job.

It was so nice! It was s worth it. I loved t so much. Hope there will be more though.

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic, the interactions between Toph and Zuko were wonderful and Tenzuh was just adorable. Thank you for this fic. :)

I cannot believe that I sat here in front of my computer for 4 hours to finish reading this entire fanfic. I love it! 3

Ok, I'm sure that this is a great fanfic, but I am incapable of reading it. This story is so full of potent, visceral awkwardness that I can't help but cringe every paragraph and walk it off. If creating the story with the highest awkwardness to conversation ratio was your goal (and I believe it was) then, MY GOD! Above and beyond! This story is great and I am sad that I appear to be physically incapable of reading it.

I am sitting at a computer listening to pitbull and sewing.
Ninja guy appears in story.
My reaction: WHAT?
A bunch of pins fall out of my mouth and land in my lap.
I read on and curse at ninja dude.

aww they are so cute

So like a coward Toph runs away... Abandoning her so-called "love", on their vacation together. She runs away, makes sure he won't be able to find her, to go get drunk and gamble? Pathetic... If Zuko had done even half of what Toph did, would they have just reunited and there would have been no hard feelings from Toph? Hell no... She would have been pissed beyond reason and she would have punished him to death but if she does it, it's "Oh you did something horrible and fucked up, Toph, you know, abandoning me and all, it really hurt me, it was like you threw me aside to hang out with your friends and get drunk and gamble, then you turn me into cat, clear across the world, in the middle of the snow and on top of all that you lose the one thing that will change me back but, ya' know, no hard feelings. All is forgive because we're reuinited again. Cheers!" BULLSHIT! No, that is beyond unrealistic and so fucked up on Toph part and Zuko just rolls over and takes it? He takes it just like he has this entire story... Nope, I'm done.

Zukoice creamyummy

I thought the story was pretty interesting... ESPECIALLY in the beginning of the story

Toko will always be my favorite pairing

Oh, that was so... awesome! It was very believeable indeed, a misunderstanding turns into a game turns into love. And the ending was... I can't even think of words to describe it. I used to think Toko was just plain weird, but... that was awesome.

I liked this story. I have just started to get into this pairing, so this story was a good intro for me. Nice job.

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