|Reviews for Its a Start|
| HarimaHige 8/23/08 . chapter 1
Realy touching. Nice story. How about a sequel?
| ALEX604 4/20/08 . chapter 1
Hi I think that the story is GREAT! and very well written except for the punctuation and grammar could be improved but overall I think it is a good start to the story and I demand that you write the next part!
| Bill900 3/1/08 . chapter 1
I like the idea here, but for the love of god PROOFREAD your story or at the very least, run it through a spell checker.
| Charles McCoy 12/26/07 . chapter 1
... OH MY FREAKIN GOD! THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!
I think im going ot cry... PLEASE WRITE MORE!
| Lastofakind 12/18/07 . chapter 1
I hope you keep this going I like this alot.
| Tropic Thunder 808 12/16/07 . chapter 1
This is a verry good story, u have me hooked and hooked good.. going to watch this very closey, so update soon please ( sorry know its just published today but am itching to see the next chapter )
P.S one thing you need to shape up on your grammer just a tiny bit.
| Sentiment Remains 12/16/07 . chapter 1
Ahh A pretty good keitaro motoko story. Yeah there were some grammar mistakes but I knew what you meant. Just keep improving!
| Totoro-Likes-Cakes 12/16/07 . chapter 1
Cute story. -
TO MANY GRAMMAR MISTAKES!
Please fix the story!
| Warbender 12/16/07 . chapter 1
Wow...Things happening quickly... I hope to see a bit more to the length of the next chappie. It was an interesting start to your story. I want to see what happens next. Update soon please.