I love this story I do.

But you need an English beta.

We have pavements not sidewalks.

We study at uni, not major in college.

We don't hit on, we flirt.

We don't have motels.

It just ruins the flow of the story and makes it hard to read. Fine if it's an American story... But Harry Potters English :/

stupid. pointless. ruining Harry Potter. Delete it.

I really loved your story! It's simly perfect!

After I read it, I just fall in love for D/G!

Now, I'm gonna try to write a story that's inside my mind, and please, if you could read it and tell me what you think about it I'll be very thankfull.

love that draco change his mind and save ginny..

the people in this fic are not very intelligent. how old are you?

if they want to bathe all they have to do is scorigify.

This is very muggle. I can't believe that two purebloods could not have thought of confounding the Hotel employee at the desk, as well as changing their apparence such as their eye and hair colour. If you wanted a drama/action series, all you had to do was go over on fictionpress and write an original where you would have gotten a lot more credit. This story just does not fit into the HP world with so little magic. Draco and Ginny come off as the stupidest wizards ever. I mean - use magic, duh!

hey good start to a story! the only thing i have issue with is how harsh molly comes off about the robes in the beginning.

Thanks for spoiling the climax.

Honestly! "All right, this is the chapter when they FINALLY kiss!"

Yeah, like I wanted to know that before it actually happened.

Critic mode - off

Fan mode - on

But that was by far one of the best DracoxGinny I've ever read, and that's saying something. Love it. It's amazing.

CBN

You are brilliant. I love every story of yours I've read so far. That's all I can say. Brilliant.

dis stry is so awsum!

i luvd da plot it was TOTLy amazin!

gud job man!

i reli enjoyd dis stry:D

I just looked and found that there is no Lord Voldemort's Game. I am completely sad. But, things happen, I suppose. I had things happen in my life that has stunted me from writing and most the time reading. My daughter and the passing of my grandfather made me completely lazy, and my daughter isn't the type to sit around and play by herself while mommy does what she wants. I would have loved to read that story, but I completely understand if something came up or you lost all inspiration to write the story. You are a great writer and I do hope you continue to write such wonderful stories.

Wow! I'm kinda speechless! OMG! This story was amazing! I love it! I saw it and I was like, hm I don't know. I'm not sure I want to read it, but I opened it and said, well I guess I could give it a try and omg! I love this story! I was like well I'm not sure it's my type of story, but it so is! I can't get over how good this story truly is! I want to just sit here in bask in the greatness that is this story. I've never had a story where they had to run from the law that is THIS good. Most the stories like this to me are not my thing, but holy CRAP! I was so wrong! Your an amazing writer! You are amazing! I'm SO glad you finished this story! If it hadn't been finished, I would have been so upset, but DAMN! YOUR one hella good writer! Sorry, I know I keep saying the same thing over and over again, but I'm like... idk. I'm not sure what to say other then I loved it, the whole plot, EVERYTHING! Draco was so not OOC! And Ginny was herself completely! And DANG! I'm still so shocked! I'm so happy! I'm so glad I looked and decided that I would read this story. THANK YOU! SO Much for such a great read! Keep up the great work, and I'm DEFFINATELY going to read Lord Voldemort's Game. I'm so completely floored. I love this story, and I'm sure I'm going to reread it again soon. YES it was THAT good! Sorry for such a long review, but I just love this story! Anyways, Thank you so much for this amazing read, keep it up!

Wonderful!

I love it :)

sorry i have to review the number are triple 6's