This is all kinds of wonderful! Lovely story, I hope you plan to write more about this two, they're greatly portrayed ;)

absolutely breath-taking. i loved it.

Very beautiful! Great work!

Beautiful!

please make another story about them... it would be a great addition to the RK fanfics to have you write it. :)

I never get tired of reading this...it's so good the way you capture their emotions.

it's great! At one glance the fic is very quiet, soft and gentle, but there are a lot of emotions pouring inside. Glad I found it :D

Love you and your stories so much! Keep writing for all of us please!

Best of Luck

Bonnie

This is beautiful. I love how the dialogue is written in italics and not in traditional quotes. It makes it seem so much more intimate and private.

That was very beautiful. So simple yet so deep. Very romantic... I don't even really know how to explain it. Your very good at expressing their relationship.

Aw! that was so beautiful! i really liked it :)

I love you and the fact that over the years you have stumbled across so many fandoms I have loved.

The whole time I was reading this, I kept remembering Sanosuke's quote from volume two: "So, you finally spent the night together? Good for you! We'd been waiting." I don't quite know why I thought of it, I just did.

Hey, I just realized something. If you like Rurouni Kenshin, Chrono Crusade, FMA, Avatar, and the like, I bet you'd love Immortal Rain! Besides, you could do utter wonders with Rain and Machika! So look it up, please!

Anyway, I loved the fic! It was absolutely beautiful.

Aw this is such a sweet and beautifully written fic.

slow, gentle, sensual...

*sigh*

ginny