The cliches you used here are just as bad and sucks as much as the cliches you hate so much. FAIL

awsome

good

will u just let kyuubi get laid u take forever

genuios complete genios u really no hoe to make people cry who knew naruto could be romantic i didnt imean knuckleheaded naruto romantic omg

omg omg omg omg this is the best fanfic i ever laid eyes on ur a genious ah i have no idea why im screaming ahah

nice story mate, random twists made the story interesting to say the least, hope you update soon

Hey this is great story i have ever read: can you contynue writing abot how naruto and his girlfriend RiKa aka Kyuubi will continue love each other and have many children also how naruto will become Jyuubi no kitsune and how he and rika will also get maried and have a wery long happy live full of romance and love.

Great story. Thanks.

awesome story

awesome story

damn very chapter man

just my opinion but dont you think narutos mask drop is too sudden? maybe the mask could drop overtime but not instantly.

this is an intresting story and your other ideas sound good. i hope u put some of the chapters for them up.

I find this story is very good, and Naruto's jutsu are awesome, Rika is a great name for Kyuubi, and a demonic Itachi and Kisame is awesome, are you going to make Gaara a demon, please do so. Also, I think Namikaze would be a better name for Naruto's sword you know, it means discord, but it's your call, I'm not trying to step on your toes.