This is so fabulous. So much insight into her patient and also herself.

Good.

This is just such an amazing story. The personal side of the Sith named Vader and a young woman who is forced to be his companion. Stories and the scars on his back and body.

Good use of words and lots of imagination.

VEry Good.

Good.

Wow. That was profound.

Good.

This is just amazing. To go through that for so long, should he live or should he die. The statement that she didn't want to show him mercy was really great, especially remembering all the deaths and misery he had caused.

This is the hardest part of the story I have a lot of trouble with, how does one love a mass murderer?

I think you handled it quite well bringing up so many people who have been hurt by him, and yet there is the scarred man himself.

oh yes, an update that has to do with Anabasis - and Vader/AnakinPadmé too! awesome

love it

A very thoughtful chapter...with a fitting title to start: one taste and there was no return.

His body spoke volume of the ugliness of his twisted life, and yet, there was this boyish little hope and innocence for physical intimacy and acceptance. The word "intoxicating" came into mind (a bit ironical, eh? given that Anakin said that in the film)

Aww... You always write so well. This chapter is no exception.

A very different Vader, but then we really didn't get to know him in the films very well. A lot of time passed in between them too.

The fighting off of the darkness and possible torture. No set meal times, nothing to keep track of. Her understanding of her feelings, but the loyalty also towards him for getting her out.

Very interesting reading.

Awesomeness! (everything you write is utter briliance on every level)

I love this piece. The relation between Vader and his agents is done extremely well, and it's rather interesting. Completely so. And I like the final sentence- the way Sabe calls him "Boss."

Regards,

-Cymru