I found the one-shot to be really sweet in a way. I like your perspective on that point of their relationship.

Short and sweet. Well done.

Nice start and plot, let see how the next chapter fleshes things out.

Your one-shots are pretty good. And this one is nicely self-contained without feeling too draggy. Although I prefer fics that are descriptive & elaborate, I like the way you don't waste words, and convey meaning within these few paragraphs.

I especially like the contrast, between who wakes up first. It gives this story its specialty.

very nice one shot