Oh I can just see an Abyssmal attack on Konan's possition already. This should be interesting.

If you need help with a fight scene I can help. Anyway, I like how some of the Celestials are trying to make Zodiac to combat the Zerg, but his main purpose was to fight the Abyssmal, which is the main threat that the Celestials had. It's a point revealed later in Tectonic. Anyway great chapter.

great story; u made a mistake...erm.. renji... obito gave kakashi his eye.

Timeline wise Kakuzu would have already been long dead. But okay then.

Very well written. lolz

Another cool chapter that was still good even though you didn't include cheese. Kdh.

dude, sasuke is taking care of his brother's kid? wow. does he even KNOW that he's itachi's son? i'd expect him to kill the poor kid or something... cool chappy though!

awsomness! gr8 chap! XD

pearla-chan

Authors notes are supposed to go at the beginning and end. ^-^

Anyway great second chapter. Can't wait to read the rest, also you will need to do something about the character Ito as well, but I can tell you more about that later.

this is awsome!
pearla-chan

interesting. a re-run of behind blue eyes. ArtisticSai is a really awesome writer and seeing as you've taken the first part of her story, you have to keep reading to complete yours to make sure it all makes sense together. i'll love to see how you write this up! the first chappy is great, itachi, a little OOC but thats ok, its so hard to keep him in character sometimes... update soon, your writing is great! ^^

Very interesting. I liked it a lot. Just one thing. Why was I not mentioned in this fic?

pretty good

Interesting, very interesting. Kdh.

Glad you got this thing started. ^-^ Can't wait to see what you come up with.