 ViolentBigGrl 2008-04-28 . chapter 1THAT is SO adorable! |
 dandyparakeet 2008-04-09 . chapter 1What about Santa Clause? |
 sonofan8track 2008-03-03 . chapter 1This was cute. |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-29 . chapter 1^-^
Merry Christmas! |
 Lola Hard 2007-12-18 . chapter 1Fantastic! I love it! :D It was particularly hilarious to see Red Alert in a Christmas mood :) Thank you!
P.S. Love the way you do rhymes ;) |
 Jason M. Lee 2007-12-17 . chapter 1Aw, some love for Red Alert. Not bad pacing with the original "Night before Christmas". Excellently done. :D |
 jazztransformsme 2007-12-17 . chapter 1aw I love it!! |
 Elita One 2007-12-17 . chapter 1lol that was cute
of course red would still be stunned after everything |
 OptimusxElita4ever 2007-12-17 . chapter 1Wonderful rendition of the poem, Red Alert needs to relax a little bit more. :).
Optimus and Bumblebee: Cya later! :) to :D. |
 P.A.W.07 2007-12-17 . chapter 1Oh my god … that was awesome. It is a poetic tribute to the classic in the way you still managed to keep up the soft rhythm of the classic poem yet complete capture Red Alert and his phobia. Love the end ... Red deserves more happy endings. |
 Bluebird Soaring 2007-12-17 . chapter 1What a wonderful job! And such a special gift to Red Alert =) |
 Elariel 2007-12-17 . chapter 1OMG! This was insanely hilarious. We hadn't heard from you in a bit and today you post this!
You have knack for both poetry and prose. :) Thanks for giving Red Alert a bit of screen time. He may not be my favorite mech, but he still is deserving of some attention from time-to-time.
Great work and thanks for sharing. :> |
 shadowblade-tara 2007-12-17 . chapter 1And i thought my rendition of that story was funny! That was just great! Poor Red Alert, hee hee hee . . . *grins* |