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Reviews for: Clandestine Thoughts
Stormshadow13
2008-01-19 . chapter 5
Wow, I have to say that all of these were very well written. You did a great job.

I also want to say that of all the 100 and 50 stories like this one. You are one of the few who wrote all and completed your story.

Great Job!
Will Kaisen
2008-01-02 . chapter 5
Hm. this is GOOD.

Succinct and maybe a little sad for the ending (my heart bleeds for Daisuke). Liked the language of flowers reference.

A picture is worth a thousand words after all.

Pats on the back all around.

PS I've always appreciated insight into characters and just because you've chosen to take it further still and apply it to a specific POV, i want to say thanks. it worked well.

All the best.
the-beginning-of-the-end'
2008-01-02 . chapter 5
forget-me-not and victory made me so sad..
the-beginning-of-the-end'
2008-01-02 . chapter 4
painting, preverts are the awesomest
the-beginning-of-the-end'
2008-01-02 . chapter 3
love lust, isolated and insane
the-beginning-of-the-end'
2008-01-02 . chapter 2
love hostile, infatuation and grudge. yup
the-beginning-of-the-end'
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
faded was my favourite
Violet Garnets
2007-12-28 . chapter 1
Nice drabbles! I'm really liking Daisuke's character development here, especially with his point of view on Krad. It seems so perfect that Daisuke will try and look for the best in everyone, even homicidal blonde figures. So it's a good beginning, and I can't wait to see some more!

Ja ne,
Vi
Eskel
2007-12-23 . chapter 1
Beautiful.

I've always had a weakness for drabbles...
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