 Stormshadow13 2008-01-19 . chapter 5Wow, I have to say that all of these were very well written. You did a great job.
I also want to say that of all the 100 and 50 stories like this one. You are one of the few who wrote all and completed your story.
Great Job! |
 Will Kaisen 2008-01-02 . chapter 5Hm. this is GOOD.
Succinct and maybe a little sad for the ending (my heart bleeds for Daisuke). Liked the language of flowers reference.
A picture is worth a thousand words after all.
Pats on the back all around.
PS I've always appreciated insight into characters and just because you've chosen to take it further still and apply it to a specific POV, i want to say thanks. it worked well.
All the best. |
 the-beginning-of-the-end' 2008-01-02 . chapter 5forget-me-not and victory made me so sad.. |
 the-beginning-of-the-end' 2008-01-02 . chapter 4painting, preverts are the awesomest |
 the-beginning-of-the-end' 2008-01-02 . chapter 3love lust, isolated and insane |
 the-beginning-of-the-end' 2008-01-02 . chapter 2love hostile, infatuation and grudge. yup |
 the-beginning-of-the-end' 2008-01-02 . chapter 1faded was my favourite |
 Violet Garnets 2007-12-28 . chapter 1Nice drabbles! I'm really liking Daisuke's character development here, especially with his point of view on Krad. It seems so perfect that Daisuke will try and look for the best in everyone, even homicidal blonde figures. So it's a good beginning, and I can't wait to see some more!
Ja ne,
Vi |
 Eskel 2007-12-23 . chapter 1Beautiful.
I've always had a weakness for drabbles... |