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| Spinderfly 2008-08-22 ch 1, | abuseGoodness. o_o(I sound like a nanny.) It never hit me before reading this how...scarred Kakashi must be. As has been stated, the imagery, metaphor and symbolism had me gasping for breath, Beautiful. |
| RedBrunja 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love how mad and damaged Kakashi is here. |
| Skoteinos Metamfiezomai 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThe kunai imagery had me swooning. The freezing metal of a weapon is such a powerful feeling-the thrill, the terror, the temptation and the feeling of being the one with CONTROl... it's something that's hard to express in words, and you did it very, VERY well. Kudos~! ~IGC t DM |
| Eldr-Fire 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseTerribly angsty. ^_^ |
| SAILORMERCY 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseoriginal...smart...dark...very well written...got a introspective of kakashi...great job. |
| beautyinsleep 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseInteresting portrayal of Kakashi--very intense, very angsty, and even very funny in some parts. I loved your use of italics throughout the drabble. The ending was perfect--wonderful job! |
| ShipperTrish 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you write. Simple, poetic, and profound. Great job! ;-) |
| bones-angel 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI can see why it's rated M. ^_^ hee, I think I'm the first to review, ... but heck, this is a very, very good angsty fic. I love it! Totally kakashi, dude! |