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| ClavellWD 2008-07-25 ch 41,  | abuseNow *this* is what a GOOD nBSG story should read like, angst, shipping, and all. nBSG isn't all about the space battles, it's about the people involved, and the trials and tribulations they go thru on the way to wherever they end up. Excellent work... and, mebbe, you can come back and finish this story, someday? I wanna see how this thing ends up (this is one of the few stories here that I have saved on my hard drive :)). |
| Maggie Moony 2008-06-25 ch 41, | abuseIntresting, i can't wait to see what will happen even though I must say I've always been iffy with the first person POV. |
| Deliriumfish 2008-06-23 ch 41, | abuseThis may be the only review I'm ever going to submit for a fic, but I'm enjoying it too much not to. Please continue! I am kind of hoping for some ends to start tying themselves up soon, one of my favorite things about the previous chapters was how tight the story was. I'm starting to lose track of some of the plots and sort of hope someone runs across Tigh soon. I would think a disappeared Commander would at least rank plotwise with PilotSex! The writing's good enough though to almost made me like Lee/Kara, which really surprised me. Really great stuff here. |
| h2olgd 2008-06-10 ch 41, | abuseLove Helo, Keep it coming. |
| archiev 2008-06-06 ch 41, | abuseThanks for the update |
| James Axelrad 2008-06-04 ch 41, | abuseits a great chapter. |
| Liastra Lee 2008-06-04 ch 41, | abuseYay!! Forward movement is good. I do like the flashbacks though. |
| panther73110 2008-06-04 ch 41, | abuseI hope you don't quit writing this story and can't wait untill the next chapters. |
| Aussie 2008-05-30 ch 40, | abuseGreat story! I loved the first and second stories! But, i'm not a shipper and feel that there's too much focus on the Lee/Kara aspects of this story. When i see an Apollo or Starbuck chapter in the last half of this story now, i just skip it. But then again, that's just because i don't like shipping stories |
| Artemis90 2008-05-30 ch 40, | abuseHi, so its taken me a while to finally re-read and catch-up with all the chapters thus far, and you've really created an very fascinating and richly detailed AU! I hope your muse continues to inspire cause I'm sure I'd like to know what happens next... but you do leave us hanging alot, don't you? |
| 42Cicely 2008-05-28 ch 40, | abuseyay! i do so love it when you update. And I hate that your muse is short-circuiting on you. If I knew a way to help I would. My up to the moment Curiosities: What is this Familiar Rights stuff? Starbuck does not seem pleased. It sounds to me like a sort of common law marriage, but involving children instead of time spent? I may be way off base, but I'm desperate to know. Why does Richards have such affection for someone who has repeatedly broken his bones? He's sounding a bit beaten woman at this point. As always, keep it up, it brightens my day! PS: you should totally work in the "Lee wears a stunning red shirt" thing from this week's episode. |
| James Axelrad 2008-05-28 ch 40, | abusethat last little bit wasnt in the end of ch38 |
| panther73110 2008-05-28 ch 40, | abusewhat did you mean by Familiar Rights did you mean Family Rights? |
| James Axelrad 2008-05-28 ch 39, | abuseinteresting point of view. |
| archiev 2008-05-27 ch 34, | abuseThanks for the update. |