awww it was short but sweet awesome

Do like. :D

It's like super short but still good. That shows the quality of your youthful writing! :3

Ahahaha, I said youthful...

Good last line, that really pulled the fic together for me. Nice work!

Aw.

I really like this one!

It's been a while since I've read an actually decent Naruto fic!

... I hate Hinata and her "HINATA NO JUTSU" *hides behind a pole and covers half of her face with her palm while STALKING Naruto* ...but no OF COURSE now she has to be FASTER than that to stalk Naruto properly when he comes back... which is why we dont see her at the beginning of Shippuden...cuz she's TOO NINJA and has succesfully perfected her hinata no jutsu... I need sleep XD Anyway, at least you metioned the GLORIOUS GAI-SENSEI! *random signs* SPIRIT OF YOUTH! HO *runs for food*

nice work

Very well done, I like your characterization. Lee is himself, if being respectful and thus toned down slightly, and Hinata is perfectly IC. It's a really well done ficlet, I enjoyed it a lot. _

ooh..is she like Naruto cuz she doesnt give up? yes that's what I'm gonna say...yay!