You have a wonderful gift.

I can honestly say that this is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've read, and possible even amateur creative writing. You manage to perfectly embody the characters not only through their dialogue and actions, but the story it self brought about the emotions in me (as a spouse of a soldier).

I do hope that you will continue to write for years to come, not just in fanfiction, as I truly believe that you have a talent.

Good luck.

- Syairuh

aw, warm fuzzies :P

Beautifully written ..

I teared up!

You turned me all to mush! Now I need a tissue. *sniffs*

Hey Ruralstar

That was fantastic do you know how long it has been since i've read something of yours. That was excellent. It made me laugh because of your characters names. I'll explain that at Livejournal that way you'll have 2 different comments from me

happy holidays.