I hope there's more of this to come. I really like the way its developing.

I liked it! This was a very interesting approach you took to enable us to get to know the characters much better. To get inside their heads. I love how you captured the essense of Deck. You did a great job with that.

When I read the first chapter of this, I thought it was meant to stand alone, so imagine my surprise when I noticed a second chapter. I can't remember if I left a review for the first chapter, so I'll say a few words about it now. I thought you captured Max's attitude perfectly. I could just imagine Max lying on her back on a standard military issue bunk, with her hands clasped behind her head, reminiscing about her time with Logan. This chapter was interesting, too, especially with the point of view switching back and forth between Logan and Lydecker. It's strange to think of the two of them being alike, but you've drawn some startling similarities between these two men. They may couch their emotions with different words and phrases, but their feelings are the same. Now, is there going to be more still or is this it?

Awwww! You've got tears rolling down my face. I can't even go into all the parts that touched me and made me cry ("You kids lie where you have fallen, and there's honor in that too" and the image of Max in the Cale family cemetery are just two examples). At first I was disappointed that you kept interrupting Logan's voice with Lydecker's, but now I think it's very effective at showing just how much Max has affected both these men and how heartbreaking it is that she's gone. I do love your writing style and I look forward to reading whatever you write next.

This is really good!!! Write more!

Thats great. Are you going to write more, like what happens when she gets out?

that was really good, cute,sad,funny, and everythign it was really good! r u writtin more? it woudl be cool if ya did, but if ya didnt it woudl still be a really neat story

very good!!

Ahhhh! This is so good! Not only does it make my shipper heart very happy ;) , but I can definitely imagine Max saying all this. I like the way you have her talk about the brownouts and the dinners ("Now I've got mess at the barracks, and guess what? They don't cook with garlic here" was a great line). I never thought about Max thinking she had imagined Logan being in the woods with her, but it makes sense. And I love the way you begin and end this with the word "Hey." Good job and keep writing!

write more pllease i hope logan her this in his dreams

Dang. Great personification of Max. You've ALMOST quelled my addiction to new DA! Thank you for a great fic!
-Shaner

rite more!!

Nice job. I can really see Max writing this. I so hope that she gets her chance for that next kiss and more this season.... If the DA writers don't give it to us
I'll just be reading lots of fan fic like yours :)