Good story! Hopefully theres more to it?

This was such a well-written story. In fact, it gave me a bit of an inspiration for a story of my own. Of course, it'll have to wait since I'm in school right now, but when I get some free time, may I use the stepfather and some of the flashbacks as part of my story?

LMAO! LOVED the peanut war! Lol. Poor Carlos but, I won't pity him 'cause he don't want that. But, I WILL say this: Carlos, you are HOT! Lol.

Great story!

Lenni

pEaCe!

p.s. Glad I found ru fics. I was SO bored n couldn't find crap 2 read! lol.

I thought that your story was very well written. The banter between characters was easy and believeable, fitting with their originally written personalities. If you hadn't said so, I would've never known that this was an a/u story because it fits so well with the SOT/Walker universe. I hope that you will continue writing and try new directions with your stories.

I like how you made it seem plausible, and the dialogue is great. I do believe I need to look for more stories of yours...

This is the coolest SOT story I have read!