Lovely! Nice way to use the question for vala to then examine how she looks at Daniel. Nice

Nothing is nicer than a little Disney on the side. :D

I really liked this.

Sweet! Love the Vala-Jasmine comparison.

Cute. Nice way to emphasize the issue of trust between them. Very sweet.

very nice, thanks!

Nice little story. Liked the little argument concerning children's stories at the beginning.

Rather cute. Wonderful!