this is probably one of the deepest things i have read in ages. and that says a lot, since i'm on ffnet almost every day.

your roxas was extremely powerful and i loved sora's innocence. very well done.)

Wow. Just... wow. This was absolutely beautiful. The dialogue was extremely effective and well written. I normally don't really like Kairi, but you wrote her in a way that made me smile. I like how she answered Sora's question (the "did we die? before he could ask it. Very Kairi-esque. My favorite bit had to be the end with Roxas because just ow, and a nice somewhat bittersweet ending that was a great closer. Great job!

Hah, I like Kairi's part the best, because she's all sighing and practical and going, "We're not going to die" and she always knows what Sora's going to say and just cuts him off. Yeah, it's funny.

And then Namine's last line just grabbed me"We...we are different." And I was really very much all:heart tug because it's just such an angsty Namine line, so accepting and distant and sort of...resigned. And bitter of course.

The title is love too. Just so you know. :D