This was awesome! I don't even know anything about the show that you based this story on. I saw the summary and liked the summary so decided to read it. Dude, I loved it! Only thing it was missing was a kis and that would've been so sweet and totally awesome! Love it!

A fascinating study, well done. I find your SAJV stories to have very interesting perspectives.

Wow. Just... yeah. Wow. This is really well written, and the tension is fantastic, especially in the last part from Jules' POV. The fact that all that huge tension is left unresolved totally makes the fic, I think. Wow. And it goes to show that some of the best slash stories are the very subtle ones, the ones without any sex and even without any direct confrontation of the characters' feelings. Because what makes slash so interesting is what happens inside, really... but anyway! I'll stop rambling. Great job, excellent fic!)

this was fabulous! your first slash? well it was great. the truly great slash transcends sex anyway i think. i like the perspectives and the characters' confusion...it seemed very natural and very real. fabulous, as i said.
write more of this please. (unless you have and i haven't seen it. if you have sorry, i'll go look).

I liked this one a lot very well written, and the way it's left unresolved just *makes* it somehow. Really great, I hope you write more like this.

Ok, I admit to being worried about the 'slash' designation. It's not something I generally read and I admit to finding it very hard to believe that any of the SAJV men might be gay. They just don't behave that way.

Anyway, damn good story. I get more of an undercurrent of anger more than anything, not that sex and anger aren't related in a way. (Ask all those sex offenders.) I can imagine both characters feeling this way and behaving this way. I especially like Jules' anger giving him more skill at fencing. Shades of "Return of the Jedi" and the dark side giving strength.

Pretty good story. Nothing much to say. wow.)