 Ganimyde 3/12/08 . chapter 1aww, this is really sweet. very sad, at the same time, though. Painful, really.
The image with the lamp and the ribbon is nice. And yes, historically accurate european christmas trees! Nice touch.
The thought about his arm is interesting. I don't know quite why he's thinking about his arm being dead, but the whole thought of it returning to his world to be "the sun of his world" is actually a very comforting thought, as I read it. And I really like how you call alchemy his sun, that which gives him beauty and life, because it really kind of is, especially the way you've written in.
My life is a little nicer for reading this. Thanks for putting it up!) |