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Starlight Socrates 10/17/08 . chapter 1
Yes, sequel! Please?

I have a horrible guily love of sick!Ed fics.
Ganimyde 3/12/08 . chapter 1
aww, this is really sweet. very sad, at the same time, though. Painful, really.

The image with the lamp and the ribbon is nice. And yes, historically accurate european christmas trees! Nice touch.

The thought about his arm is interesting. I don't know quite why he's thinking about his arm being dead, but the whole thought of it returning to his world to be "the sun of his world" is actually a very comforting thought, as I read it. And I really like how you call alchemy his sun, that which gives him beauty and life, because it really kind of is, especially the way you've written in.

My life is a little nicer for reading this. Thanks for putting it up!)
Bar-Ohki 2/6/08 . chapter 1
Poor Edward, that's got to be so sad...
TheQueenOfMediocrity 1/12/08 . chapter 1
once again, a high quality piece of work. it was interesting and well written. very nice.
Kitsu 12/18/07 . chapter 1
i've read the story because of the title. I'm german so when it help you i can say you you the title is very bad.

The word "Weihnachts" didn't exist in the way you write wenn you would like to say Christmas Tree you can say "Weihnachts Baum", but when you would like to say Christmas you must say "Weihnachten".

I know german is really hard to learn. Luck that i've been born in German and live n German. *laugh*
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