Lol, way too funny! This was great! Perfect!


~Caraqueen

haha, FABULOUSNESS! I actually really love this couple, tho I know pretty much nothing about them and only descovered the pairing thru ff, but this oneshot pretty much embodies all that I love about them. Nice job!

It made me go, "Aw" out loud. Not many stories can do that. I hope you're happy.

aww, I don't know why I haven't come across this story before, but I'm glad I did. Just the right amount of cuteness - absolutely adorable without overdoing it. =D

I really like the ending, it is classic Jinx. After hearing a compliment, her threats turn even more dangerous, but you know she actually likes it. hence, the slight blushing. aww!

:D

I just love little ideas like this. Nicely executed.

A suspended moment in time between them that manages to frankly capture his personality. A subtle thing I was really pleased with was how he was so eloquent in the first paragraph, and then he suddenly breaks off, mid-rant, about all the little characteristics of Jinx just to say she was pretty.

It's that type of flow in this piece that helped to characterize him. Selection of detail was great, especially the specifics involving his power. The drabble did frequently switch off between past and present tense, but it wasn't distracting at all.

Ah. Flinx...has a very nice ring to it if I do say so myself. ^^ Nice work.

I think if you looked for synonyms for the phrase "short and sweet", this would pop up in any online thesaurus.

Basically: This was BALLIN'! :D It was undeniably cute and terribly amusing. I love it. :)

Typicall Wally West, aka: Kid Flash. Totally oblivious to what she's ranting about, and only focusing on her pretty face. I can totally picture him doing that. Good job!
Brillient one-shot/drabble/wahtever ya wanna call it.
~*Tsuki*~

Brevity is the soul of wit, to paraphrase Polonius.

Also, this was undeniably charming. Or, if you prefer(and I know I do) it rocked balls. Good work. ;)

haha! oh man this was great, just the idea of Jinx trying to take out a kitten has got me in stitches, and poor kid flash with his TOTAL lack of attention span.

Oh that was so cute! Is this your second One-Shot for Kid Flash and Jinx? I remember your previous one and that was really cute too. I really like how you capture small moments when you write. Or small thought during really big moments. And I just loved Kid Flash's thoughts. It just so fit him and I couldn't help but snile at thought of Jinx's annoyance at him, since it's really a 'I like you, but I'm not going to show it' annoyance.

Overall, a very sweet One-Shot. I hope you write more for the Kid FlashXJinx pairing. Sorry I didn't review sooner BTW. I've been on vacation for a while so yeah. Anyways, this was once again an awesome read.

Later!

~Rena

Very sweet. Kidflash and Jinjx really are very cute together

^_^

Cool. Very nicely written little cute drabble!