|Reviews for One of Those Tragic Lives|
| XB16B2 3/22/08 . chapter 1
Very nice. I especially liked the 'Sirius freaking Black' bit. Also a bit of insight into a character we don't see much, so another five points for you. I would get rid of the slang though ('gonna', 'drug' etc); it ruins the flow of the story.
On that note, I'd like to urge you to check out geo cities rocky_mountain_international . Sans the spaces, of course. They're looking for good writers, and you definitely have the skill set. ;)
| Avindara Nirvene 1/6/08 . chapter 1
lol, I love this! good portrayal of emmeline, you've given her a life xD
"And really, can’t all, or at least most, women’s problems be summed up in three very similar words" lol! and "who everyone knows, deep in their bones, are gonna die soon" is beautifully sad. :( also the last line. I lovee this! XD
| Anomalous Anonymous 1/5/08 . chapter 1
You're my new hero ;-)
No, really, there just aren't enough Sirius Emmeline fics out there-keep up the good work and update! Youd did a very nice job with the tone and the atmosphere-the emotions were very real. Nice job.
| freak.on.a.leash.13 12/29/07 . chapter 1
| Rin07 12/18/07 . chapter 1
This sounds like it is going to be really good keep writing!
| Cuban Sombrero Gal 12/17/07 . chapter 1
This is marvellous. It's horribly tragic, but beautifully well written. I love the way you've tied in her death and the photo of the Order.