He he. Cute.

Aw, poor Kel. He's fell for Yuki...

Ha ha, this really does describe Neal.

Aw, I liked this one- I didn't think it was bad.

Wow I really love this fanfic. It's awesome. I'm wondering if I'm the only one who had to sing the alphabet to realise there is actually a little pause between 'P' and 'Q'.

This is really interesting, and oh, that last one's heartbreaking. I like how you leave off details and how you explain them later. Thanks for sharing!

I'm not sure Kel's "mask" of calmness should be referred to as a physical mask, though. It sounds a little odd in "14. N is for Neal" as because it's first person, that sounds like she's actually thinking of it as a mask. Particularly in "my mask on pieces on the floor" - would she really THINK of it as a physical mask? That seems more like how others would perceive it when she keeps herself calm and cool, her face blank. Just a thought.

This story is very funny. I love all of them! suggestions/guesses for the next few letters, if you haven't chosen them yet.
Q: Quirk, Quip, or Quiet
R: Rude, Reason, or Rival
S: Sarcasm or Stupidity

These are really good, although this last one was a little sad! Looking forward to more. Good luck finding a word for Q!

Ooh...*wide eyed* Those were different.

And by different I mean GOOD GOOD GOOD different, before you start worrying; I don't know what it was about those last two chapters that just sounded a bit more angsty than the others. Is that the right word? Perhaps not. Hell, I don't know what I mean! Basic message: I LIKE IT.

Especially loved the title-'That little pause between P and Q'-what an ingenious idea! Great idea. It was a good idea on the whole, that chapter-very emotional, very Kel-like. Very good!

Sorry for taking so long to reply, school is horrible and sucks away all my time... :D But glad to hear that Coldplay were good-I just adore them! So good...

Keep up the good work! :)

i like this story. good job!

I love how you added the pause between P and Q. I don't think anyone else would even think about adding the pause in their non-existent ABC stories, but sh, don't tell them that.

~Jaden Scorpio~

i'm so excited because i think i'm seeing coldplay next year... and if you say its amazing... it means it's worth the money...

liked it!
how very cool!

So Kel's in love with Neal in this one? That kind of makes me sad. Update soon.
Sarah

Yep i liked it,

Heartwrenching. Ouch.