Wow. It's getting beter and beter.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

Aw... that ending was amazing!


Good chapter!

-Ray

Aww, that was really cute, a bit disjointed, but still nice.
Hell yes! Drag Itachi and his abusive ** off!
Update son!
~Sunny

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Kool.Ive been waiting for ever.O, and not trying to be mean but wats up with passionate butt sex.

ok that weird...sasuke and naruto dancing...
plz update soon!!

That was so cool!

Are you going to mae another chapter to this?

In some places at the start of the story you use past tense, then you use present tense, i'ts a little hard to figure out. You may need to go back and fix that. There were also a few spelling mistakes. It kind of seemed like it went a little fast, but other than that it was good! Update soon! *note: just trying to give constructive criticism*