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kong is king.
2008-06-15
ch 1,
abuseThe Squinoa was very cute. Rinoa must be really good at what she does to get Squall to talk. And he's saying "I love you" every time? Sigh...

Your stories make it very hard for me to sound like a guy.

This is totally unrelated, but when I was rereading strangled blossom, I noticed you mentioned "23 thingsI wanted to tell you." That was from Mahou's Axette, wasn't it? Yeah, I know I'm late, but hey, I always forget these sorts of things.

Kong is King
kouu no Kaori
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseso true
Glimmerous
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseLOL! That's so cute! : D
Raftina
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseOmg, this was super hilarious! Believe it or not, I have actually witnessed a conversation like this, except it was between friends and not lovers. Although, I think it's super cute when one of them is really shy^.^
GoddessLD
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abusethis so so funny!! XD
and its believable too!
i cant imagine having a phone conversation with someone like squall
Mistress Coyo
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuseLOL! That was awesome!
ButtonPinCollector
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseI had a hard time keeping myself from laughing this time. xD Squall needs to learn to use a telephone, really.
Lemon-Chan84
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseVery cute! I liked how Rinoa heard her own versions of Squall's response. Makes you imagine what she could have "heard" while all we saw was "..."
Keep writing!
Akane Naomi
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseLol, cute conversation! XD Even though Squall didn't say much but it was hilarious! Just wanted to tell you that.
-x.gone
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseThis was very adorable. && so believable. I heart it. (:
Razer Athane
2008-01-03
ch 1,
abuselmao! XD
SecretBox
2007-12-31
ch 1,
abuseAww.

That was so so precious.
.PictureFitTheFrame.
2007-12-23
ch 1,
abuserinoa must've treasured squall's "huh" and "bye" very much.. anyways, it is nice..
Relyob
2007-12-21
ch 1,
abuseLmao! That was v.cute and sweet. Hah. Y'know what I think would be awesome? If you built on this and added different phone conversations between different characters (and more of Squall and Rinoa cause this was uber amazing!) and then! A big huge one at the end. ;) But that's just a suggestion, anyways I'm deffo faving this. Keep it up. :D
Renegade Seraph
2007-12-19
ch 1,
abuseLol, aww so sweet.
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