You know, as of late I've noticed that with every bit of writing you do, you get better and better. This dear,is by no means an exception. Most everything about the story was oh so much better than before.

Though there were a few sentences here and there that could have perhaps been worded a bit clearer, they didn't do much to obsturct the overall wonderfulness of your masterful writing.

Okay... That last chapter was highly disturbing. XD But funny. How many other inanimate objects can Gatrie fall in love with while drunk? Hmm...

Very nice. Keep up the good work!

Oh, I loved the one about Ike's voice, too. Ike and Boyd both grew so much, while Rolf didn't grow that much, and Soren actually SHRANK between PoR and RD... Methinks someone's been giving Ike and Boyd growth hormones.

I love shinon. He's one of the best. Try a mia shinon thing, i love those, and so few people do those. I guess Shinon needs his chance to tick someone off, what after what i did to him, well, mia. Ever read it? You may know what I'm talking about if you have, or just look at my profile. It's the only story.

Pretty pictures. Where? I loved that one! Hilarious!

you ever thought about doing something involving soren and lethe?

M, Homasa comtemplating fried chicken. I like the way you had it capitalized every time. Not sure why, but whatever.

Oh, but I did find just one itty typo: "His self-esteem wasn't too bad, he remained clam and sure of himself..." Switched 'calm' with 'clam' which is something that I personaly do quite often.

And how could you write something about chapter 19 without Stefan? Pretty much impossible, really.

Now Stefan is finger-licking-good

Aw! A sick Karel! XD So he's not invincible... ;D

I lawl'd at Ike's deep voice. That is so true. Keep going

HAHA, I KNEW NOBODY CARED ABOUT MAKALOV, AND I KNEW DEVDAN HAD POTENTIAL TO MAKE SOREN CONVULSE IN PAIN/ANGER/FEAR! WOOHOO!

Very nice, of course.

I like this one! A perfect picture of how alcohol can make anyone friends! Oh and the way they talked! I was laughing th entire time! great job! ;P

I can't believe you wrote this one after all! Far better than I was expecting. Soren's perfume for the win! Now get writing another oneshot.

whew, there are other sorenx Mist fas out there.

you wrote them because you were bored, I read them because i was bored. what goes around comes around. keep it goin'!

p.S. I did read all the chapters, but i put the review on tis one becaus it was the best.

Frog: That was cute! I liked it. I don't like IkexSoren either. There aren't enough of either of them paired with girls. Though I didn't really get the whole thing with Tibarn... Rolf and Sothe hadn't even been in the tent during the meeting I thought. But I guess you can put them wherever you want. Of course, I tend to get confused. Anyways, good job. Update soon! Bye!

So, you probably know what I'm going to say, but let me reiterate anyway.

I really didn't see too much romance, but after reading it a second time I can actually see where you snuck in some implicit bits. If you're planning on continuing this then I can see how the lack romance and foreshadowing can work more to your advantage. Oh, and you get bonus points because the characters are actually fairly in character.

There's also the one sneaky typo I managed to catch and you might want to look into that. All in all, I really think this was a great first try. I'm looking forward to seeing if you'll continue this and, of course, the rest of your collection.