This is different from what i thought it would be.
A verry interesting idea, if I may say so. It was sad, but actually this story was kinda calm.

Poor Akira...

I like how they talk about after their game... They reveal so much and so little! It's amazing how well they can see under each other's words to what they truly mean...

You have their characters down! Great job! Well written.

Well written, but sad story. Thanks for sharing.

I just wanted to say that I read and enjoyed this. :)

very kewl

That's a very interesting take, it's the first time I've read a hikaru no go fic where Akira understood it all without Hikaru having to spell it out for him, and that to me was a bonus. Your story kept the tone of the original series throughout and I love it! kudos for a great job :-)

I like this piece a lot. It is written magnificently and is almost perfect. The ending was a bit abrupt when you pulled Hikaru's secret into it and I was a bit confused about Touya's response. Either way, it is a terrific piece of work and one of my favorites.

That´s such a nice piece of writing^^
You did a great job, really,
with so much emotion, but not too much!
XD

Nice and well written! And not too angsty, given the subjects, really believable with characters 'in character' so to say. i really enjoyed it!