(Overall Review) Just when I thought "Stars Fell On Pallet Town" couldn't get any better, this sequel proves me wrong. Wow! I'd dare to say this sequel is almost better than the first installment.

We get to learn a lot more about Ash's dad, along with getting some answers as why he cheated on Delia. On top of that, there's a lot more Pokeshipping this time around. We can definately see Ash and Misty have gotten much closer since the first story. This story's excellently well-rounded, loaded with a great balance of drama, romance, and more than a fair share of Ash antics (I adored the hideaway episode! Poor Ash!). Good lord, you have such a talent for portraying Ash at his best! Gary's involvement was a welcomed surprise, too, and I prefered his attitude in this sequel than I did in the previous.

In a nutshell, this is an excellent addition to this series! Bravo!

Well, he was braver than me. I would've run for my life had I been Ash, but then again I don't think I would've hit Gary. It sounded to me like he was being sincere. I think Ash should have at least tolerated him for the night so his parents could enjoy some time together. At the same time, I wonder why, if Gary is truly so sorry, he would have said those malicious things to Ash in "Stars Fell on Pallet Town"? I hope to find out in the next chapter.

Wow, this was GREAT! Haha, funny, it's adequate to say Happy New Years now also. :D Anyways, this was SO good. I read some reviews that said that Ash was being a brat, but I don't think so. He was going through a tough time and all he wanted was to spend time with his parents who didn't seem like they wanted to spend time with him. He felt bad, and the way he reacted was though anger. Anyways, this was great. Really good!

I loved it. (:

Angelica

Oh, and YAY! Ash and Misty are togetha! Whoo! Sorry, er, ahem... xD

hehe ok hes still a lil mushy but ive just finished chapter 14 and i think its so much better... was good but now it feels like its all comin to a close makes me feel good inside ^_^ great writing!!

eheheheheh that email is the wrong one... this one review is tagged with the right one SRRY!! ^_^

Aight i loved the first one of the series was very interesting and protrayed ash very well...
This second one tho idk heh... I just finished chapter ten and Ash is bring a spoiled brat with emotional problems... seriously he would never do that and its just plain wrong makes me despise ash in this story which is something i dont like to do :(... other than that good story lol

how cute. w/ Ash&Misty. well on2 the next story. CHA!

D@MN U! U MADE ME CRY AGAIN!... that's not normal. I never cry.

his dad should've found out why Ash hated Gary so much.

GARY OAK's HOUSE... HAS ASH's MOM LOST IT!

Ash calling a gym stupid... OH, MY, GOD, IT'S THE 5th SIGN OF THE APOCALYPSE! RUN AWAY! CHA!

so judging from pt. 3's preview Ash and Misty get closer towards the end of this story. CHA! i hope its fluffy. K

WOW! Really good ending (*sob* It's over! NO!) and an AMAZING poem! Kudos to Llyxius and yourself! *grin*

No! Don't end it! PLEASE! *looks at your profile* Phew! There's another one! THANK YOU! *grin* Watch Misty deny everything!

*laugh* He found it! I wonder what happened to all the bushes? *grin*