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| Ace101_aka_Jph@yahoo.com 2008-07-28 ch 14, anon. | abusehehe ok hes still a lil mushy but ive just finished chapter 14 and i think its so much better... was good but now it feels like its all comin to a close makes me feel good inside ^_^ great writing!! |
| Ace101_aka_Jph@yahoo.com 2008-07-27 ch 10, anon. | abuseeheheheheh that email is the wrong one... this one review is tagged with the right one SRRY!! ^_^ |
| Ace101_aka_Jph@yahoo.com 2008-07-27 ch 10, anon. | abuseAight i loved the first one of the series was very interesting and protrayed ash very well... This second one tho idk heh... I just finished chapter ten and Ash is bring a spoiled brat with emotional problems... seriously he would never do that and its just plain wrong makes me despise ash in this story which is something i dont like to do :(... other than that good story lol |
| JamesRKS 2008-04-23 ch 15,  | abusehow cute. w/ Ash&Misty. well on2 the next story. CHA! |
| JamesRKS 2008-04-23 ch 14, | abuseD@MN U! U MADE ME CRY AGAIN!... that's not normal. I never cry. |
| JamesRKS 2008-04-23 ch 10, | abusehis dad should've found out why Ash hated Gary so much. |
| JamesRKS 2008-04-23 ch 8, | abuseGARY OAK's HOUSE... HAS ASH's MOM LOST IT! |
| JamesRKS 2008-04-23 ch 2, | abuseAsh calling a gym stupid... OH, MY, GOD, IT'S THE 5th SIGN OF THE APOCALYPSE! RUN AWAY! CHA! |
| JamesRKS 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseso judging from pt. 3's preview Ash and Misty get closer towards the end of this story. CHA! i hope its fluffy. K |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2008-03-20 ch 15, | abuseWOW! Really good ending (*sob* It's over! NO!) and an AMAZING poem! Kudos to Llyxius and yourself! *grin* |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2008-03-20 ch 14, | abuseNo! Don't end it! PLEASE! *looks at your profile* Phew! There's another one! THANK YOU! *grin* Watch Misty deny everything! |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2008-03-20 ch 13, | abuse*laugh* He found it! I wonder what happened to all the bushes? *grin* |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2008-03-20 ch 12, | abuseHmm. Well THAT sounds like a good idea! *rolls eyes* Not! ... I really want to hit Ash right now. Good story, by the way! You're a very talented writer! |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2008-03-20 ch 11, | abuse*mutters* Spoiled brat! No wonder he doesn't have an ounce of common sense! *sighs* I wonder how Brock and Misty are going to react when they come home? |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2008-03-20 ch 10, | abuseO.O' You are such a psychic, it's scary! *not saying any more* |