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| laustic 2008-02-22 ch 15,  | abuseThis was a beautiful chapter. I'm glad that Tsubaki is finally able to start moving on from Muraki. I enjoyed this fic a lot and I'm a little sad that it's over but at least it ended wonderfully. |
| laustic 2008-02-15 ch 14, | abuseI loved how Tsubaki shared her past with Hijiri. I think it was good for her. Thanks for posting and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| laustic 2008-02-08 ch 13, | abuseGood chapter! I'm a little sad that it's ending, but at least its been a good ride. Thanks! |
| laustic 2008-02-04 ch 12, | abuseYou know, I've always been fond of Tsubaki (I really believe that she and Hisoka are kindred spirits) and so it's great to read fics where she plays a good part. Hee, I love how she's able to get people to tell her what she wants to know. Good chapter! |
| laustic 2008-01-31 ch 11, | abuseThis keeps getting more interesting :) Looking foward to the next chapter. |
| laustic 2008-01-28 ch 10, | abuseHmm, does Tsubaki have deeper feelings for Hijiri than she's ready to admit? This is getting really good! |
| laustic 2008-01-25 ch 9, | abuseTsubaki certainly has a way with getting people to talke ^_^ Cool chapter, plus I love your Watari! He is one energentic guy. |
| laustic 2008-01-20 ch 8, | abusePoor Tsubaki, she just can't get a break from Muraki. I enjoyed this chapter very much and it's fun to read Tsubaki and Hijiri being paired up as partners :) |
| laustic 2008-01-15 ch 7, | abuseIt was good to read Tsuzuki having a chat with Hijiri about his feelings for him. Hopefully Hijiri will be able to move on from him ^_^ Good work! |
| laustic 2008-01-14 ch 6, | abuseAnother awesome chapter! I'm in total agreement about Tsuzuki not being quite healed after Kyoto. I think he'll get better, but he'll never fully heal. I think Kyoto was too traumatic for that to happen. I liked the part were Hisoka told Tsubaki how much he trusts Tsuzuki, even though he's aware of Hijiri's feelings. It goes to show how far Tsuzuki and Hisoka have come in their relationship ^_^ |
| laustic 2008-01-06 ch 5, | abuseOh! I'm so excited that Tsuzuki and Hisoka have made an appearance and I'm looking forward to them seeing Hijiri again. Great work! |
| laustic 2008-01-03 ch 4, | abuseSorry about the late review! I've been trying to review for the past 2 days but I kept getting an error page :( Anyway, this fic keeps getting more interesting! What is going to happen to Hijiri and Tsubaki now that Tetsua knows who Hi-chan is. |
| laustic 2007-12-30 ch 3, | abuseThey never seem able to get away from Muraki. He just keeps coming back to haunt them all. Another good chapter and it's good to see Hijiri and Tsubaki working well together. |
| laustic 2007-12-21 ch 2, | abuseI take it that Hijiri is referring to Tsuzuki when he said "him." I'm looking forward to reading Hijiri and Tsubaki's adventures. I wonder what she'll be like around Hijiri, especially since he does look like Hisoka. |
| laustic 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseI'm so excited that you're writing a sequel! This first chapter is quite promising. I can't wait for the next chapter. |