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Reviews for: In the Sun
Satoshi and Haruka
2009-04-26 . chapter 1
Yeah! IT Awesome!

(I come form thailand you know I haven't understand english to much but I can talk very well)

I used to be advanceshipper too! since I see may with ash!

PERFECT!
angel
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
PLEASE DON'T TELL ME THIS IS A ONESHOT THIS STORY IS AWESOME
ReaderADV
2008-06-08 . chapter 1
Cute.
This is perfect for a sequel!
Praetor of the Templar
2007-12-22 . chapter 1
That was sweet. At least May accepts the fact that she loves Ash.

" She made quiet a name for herself. "

It is quite not " quiet ".
BbbStrwbrry
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
Awesome job. Can't wait for something new.
JbstormburstADV
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
Whoa... that was interesting. I have to say, that was a pretty good sonng-fic. And the fact that Drew knew he was going to be turned down is a bonus. Keep it up.
LuciferIX
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
I don't think that there were too many holes at the end. I'm just glad the only one left hanging was Drew. That ribbon is one of the best symbols advanceshippers have and you used it subtly yet perfectly.

Great job, I'm off to read the other new one shot you put up. Keep up the good work!
zeaeevee
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
aww...
totally KAWAII!!

I SO LOVED THIS. (i so need to start practicing my one shots)

KEEP THOSE FICS COMING!!
~nya~ (=^_^=)
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