this screams for a sequel XD

i think you should have kept on going. so much more could have happened!

i/m sorry but that was not good and you are a better writer than wrtiting trash

Ry & Seth are not gay

Awesome. Your Ryan and Seth are perfect! Such a good beginning. I know you 'say' it's complete... but maybe, just maybe the plot fairy will hit you on the head and there will be more. You could take this so many places. Ryan and Seth are my new 'addiction', thanks for the fix.

seth and ryan are both in character!
you did a great job.
there's only the occasional error so no probs.
i'm trying to write for the oc too.
and isn't it sad how no one really writes anymore?

That was totally funny! Nicely written, I really liked the interaction between Ryan and Seth, the whole situation was just too good to pass up on some flirting! Are you going to continue this, I really liked it. Oh, and the part where Seth nearly kills that guy in a headlock, you had me in stitches, I was bouncing in my seat going: yeah seth, you go for it dude! hahaha, anyway, well done, it was easy to read and I certainly thought it was original, plus who wouldn't like to imagine Seth with handcuffs (snicker)
Keep up!