Ooh, I like this. Good work!
Riley Erin)

Great story. Please update soon. x.

Sweet.

great story!

“large and in charge” lol classic!

I love how you threw a more 'human' light on Dudley)

Very good ! Dudley is quiet rare in fanfictions, I loved this one
Good continuation ! )

That was amusing! Thank you for the interesting read!

What a great read. You really got it right and it is so believable. I really like the wry ending, as well _

I was just reading the 7th HP book again and instantly I wondered "What happened to Dudley?" Thanks for clearing it all up for me!

great idea to work with, and even better writing to go along with it.
well done

this is great! I can just imagine Harry's reaction "My secretary is marrying Dudley" I also liked the strength thing nice insight into why he would not like magic.

ok, it was really good, but WHAT KIND OF FUCKING ENDING IS THAT?

wow i think this is the best reaction from dudley i have ever read of all those stories where he falls in a love with a witch! its perfect! he accepts it in the end, but obviously its hard for him because of his history with magic... i think you really had a great understanding of the character! excellent job although... i would LOVE to read a sequel where lena tells harry or something along those lines hehe

That was so good! How ironic that Lena works for Harry. I hope you plan to continue this!

That was great. The characters were very believable and displayed distinct personalities. The plot was cute, without being sappy, and concluded with a nice solid ending. A fine piece of work.