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Star Jinin 2008-06-28 ch 1,	abuseLike everything else you've written, this is brilliant! I mean, what people don't comprehend is that Light is neither good nor evil and L is no better than Light. They both use intolorable methods, and in the end, they both are trying to defend their own opinion of justice and convince the world what they're doing is right. The bolded stuff made the story interesting, only some of the stuff cuts off. I think you should write more Death Note fics, honestly. I think it really brings out your inner talent of comprehending all this deep stuff!
Gepetto 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abuseYou make me feel as if there's no point trying to write, because no matter how good I am... Well, look at yourself! If you're not published, you better get to it. The world does not deserve to be deprived of your talents. Always, Robert Mason
Penguincita 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseGAH! "I know where you are, I know what you need to kill, and I think you'll play a nice game with me. Won't you?" "L, he manipulates the failures of others." "Light knows, he knows who he is. He is going to do the unheard of, where no artist has gone before - he is going to manipulate his own self..." "Light, he refuses to waste time hating L when logic tells him to hate Kira instead." "Perhaps Light will be Kira again. L hopes so." "How else do you pretend that you're pretending?" All of those lines left me breathless. You go so deeply with both of these characters, and it's so right, because that's exactly what both of them do, what they're about. I love, absolutely love your interpretation of them, the slight touches of Light as an artist (I don't know if using a musical extended metaphor in the very beginning of your "ballad" was intentional, but it WORKS) and the bolded ballad outline. Brava! (I think I prefer your response to boredom to Light's.) ;-)
Kerosael 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseThis is written absolutely beautifully. Really, really, the most gorgeous and tragic words I've read for ages. Have you ever read Phlegethon River by Nilahxapiel? If you haven't, I suggest it. It is an incredible read, my favourite ever DN story, extremely well written. And Justify is easily on par with it. Great achievement :)
judi42 2008-01-07 ch 1,	abuseWow, story bloody awesome, really is fantastic and IC, really captured the personalities of Light and L. This was an epic story. I love your writters smile The Author's Notes is funny "when I get bored, I have a habit of ...killing Light and/or L" hehehehe.
phoenix of hell 2007-12-22 ch 1,	abuseWell, I shall thank the Christmas vacation for bringing another of your brilliant piece of writing. I LOVE it, it is very deep. Of course, the analogy with chess was excellent, and it's fit for their game. I especially liked how you portrayed their thoughts on each situation, L's especially, that confidence that he will catch Kira, and the idea of him using torture. I find him perfectly capable of using torture on his suspects, and I don't mean just what we saw in the manga/anime. And the ending was excellent!
judikickshiney 2007-12-20 ch 1,	abuseThat was amazing. I think the habit of killing them off when you are bored is quite a good one, really. I like reading the fruits of your boredom. It goes to a good cause, all in all. Judi
Imcannedfruit 2007-12-19 ch 1,	abuseOh wow. It took me a while, but I'm glad I read it. The style of this fic was... different. I liked it.
TrustTheHypocrite 2007-12-19 ch 1,	abuseHeh...Well at least you always manage to kill them beautifully. Something about the dangerous magnetism of these two always keeps my attention in these stories. Also loved the bolded words approach that you took. The ending line gave me tingles, and now I'm in a sluggishly pensive mood. (yay) As always, thanks so much for these wonderful fics!
Sarahfreak 2007-12-19 ch 1,	abuseThis was an awesome fic...Especially how you tied in all the bible verses and bold statements...really well written...Loved it
Tayles 2007-12-19 ch 1,	abuseDead men don't rejoice, neither do the ones who loved them. That... I just love that line. It's perfectly L, and I love it. This whole thing was, as ever, so, so well written. It tugged and it pulled and it kinda hurt, but oh, it was so well done. I will never get enough of how you write these two. Never.
yingyingyang 2007-12-18 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant. Bloody brilliant. I really enjoyed how you switched points of view after the bolded words. You really captured the personalities of Light and L. Were the bolded words quotes or simply a way to set the mood?
Calamus 2007-12-18 ch 1,	abusewow. I'm speechless. Ok, not really. I could go on and on about how I love your style (superb, really) and how fucking _real_ your characters are, but you know that already, so instead I'll praise you on the amazing insight into DeathNote you showed with this fic. Believe me when I say that I never realised what a master in manipulation Light tryllu was -- to manipulate himself! He was the pupeteer that engineered everything to work as perfectly as well-oiled clockwork. This character continues to awe me. You L... perfect, simply perfect. I read a fic called "true elision" (go check it out, it's an excercise in character development all over) which described L as a mousetrap. I thought it was perfect, too, and your L behaves just like a mousetrap -- you don't idealise him, at all; you show him just as he is: a resented child that never grew up, who takes delight in chasing people who enjoy freedom when he was never allowed to, and who just cares about the hunt, not what he is hunting. Superb, really. So, I'm instantly faving this. Are you interested in having it translated into Spanish? I'm offering. And if you are interested, don't be all "oh, only if it won't be too much trouble" because I offered for a reason! bye! Calamus
Khiyu 2007-12-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is just gorgeous. It makes me incredibly sad... and thoughtful... and happy because it's just so well-written and I love it. Poor L... poor Light... I thought the line "Dead men don't rejoice, neither do the ones who loved them" was particularly powerful. T_T
DXM Junkie 2007-12-18 ch 1,	abuseElegent! I love all your stories! Keep em going and I'll keep reading them!

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