 taz0718two@aol.com 2009-05-08 . chapter 1 i love this story i think u should do couple more add on to this story like make chapter 3 a new years then the next 50 or so into a full on winter vaction story with the whole family possibles and stoppibles i like then go on from there |
 sean mcconnell 2009-03-23 . chapter 2 hi there i very much loved this story in fact i read this story 100 times now i would like to see if u can do any follow ups on this and with the same people like new years or v-day or all the other days that comes after and maybe have ben in the story and make it that one of rons old fows comes back for him namely that guy that always calls him outsider or even warhawk or some one like that or you could add in HE-MAN and i mean the 1980s one who is still thy best by the way oh and keep up with the good work in fact i think it was so good u should go work for the writers of the kim possible show and make these story for an up comeing kp ep i think u do great at it good bye for now u could e-mail back on that at stay cool now |
 Ffordesoon 2008-09-21 . chapter 2Hey,
Dug this chapter more than I dug the first one, if that's possible! :D
All the hints as to the directions of the two universes were fun, and I thought the use of Gwendolyn was quite inspired.
Plus, you know, it was sweet. And your Kim and Ron are damn near my favorites. And your OCs are great as always.
10/10, again! :D |
 dude90716 2008-03-12 . chapter 2honestly, it would be easier to list the shows that dont have a cameo in at least one of ur stories...i just cant think of any...not that i m complaining...
oh and the whole warlord invaison was an episode on the show? i musta missed that one...and WHAT HAPPENED TO RUFUS?!? |
 dude90716 2008-03-12 . chapter 1alright, your Nothes explained everything...almost.
namely, Rufus? |
 2008-02-02 . chapter 2 That was pretty good. I read this a while ago, but forgot to leave a review. >_< Anyway, I was kinda wondering if Shego and Kimila would appear since it had been a while, and sometimes if you give a problem enough time, it isn't quite as bad when you try to get it resolved, since feelings likely would have died down a bit. But, aside from that, I liked how everything flowed. Although, I think that it was kind cruel to keep Kim from not being able to do anything. I mean, even if she was sent on other errands, I'm sure she'd have enjoyed at least having something to occupy her. But, oh well. ^_^ Though, I'm wondering if you're planning on writing any more in this certain universe of yours. Anyway, thanks for posting this. I really enjoyed it! ^_^ |
 Slyrr 2008-01-21 . chapter 2Actually having the characters discussing the different universes they were from was an interesting touch. I'm not sure I can explain it, but it lent an aura of unity to the tale, especially since it was done not during a fight or a villain situation, but over an exchange of Christmas gifts.
The gift exchange scenes had a solid feel to them too, as the major events in my own gift exchange memories were mentioned here too. Most of all, feeling tired when it's all over, and people in other areas of the house trying out their new swag.
Even in the 3rd week of January, it still had a Christmas feel to it (I myself haven't taken down the lights yet). I wasn't sure who Gwen was until Ben was mentioned in context and his watch. Cute! All the copies of the HP series I've seen in other people's houses are looking pretty hashed too : )
Excellent stuff. A bit lighter than your normal fare, but sometimes that can be a refreshing change of pace... |
 Invader Johnny 2008-01-21 . chapter 2Yes the Christmas theme lost all meaning after all we ARE in January, still it was a very entretaining story to read.
Not to mentioned I had a kick out of a few things here, mostly on Kim's desire to "help" out in the kitchen, seems the redhead is NEVER gonna be a good cook.
I also enjoyed the slight crossover, I say "slight" because only Gwen was in this fic.
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 Mars Project 2008-01-21 . chapter 2You my friend, are really something. I could clearly imagine the scene unfolding at the Possible Household. XD
Again with the cameos! And somehow the characters are a TOTAL surprise! Gwen was a nice choice, and her marrying one of the tweebs? She has NO IDEA what kind of family life she is in for!
The only thing that kinda bummed me out is that Shego, Kimila and their daughters never made an appearance. Would really have liked to see what it would have been like.
I vote best scene would be when the cyber doll Mia was about to undress in the middle of the whole family! I can just imagine the looks on the faces of all the guys.
Another excellant job man! Now get to work on your other story arcs! I'm eagerly awaiting whats going to happen in Sidekick, No More in the MI arc! |
 rebafan4ever 2008-01-20 . chapter 2aww what a good end to a cute story, very good job :) |
 CajunBear73 2008-01-20 . chapter 2Nice tale over all here Blackbird! Like Kim once said: they may be crazy, but they're family, or something like that.
Yeah, the overall adventure of so many family members getting together like that leads to some of what you portrayed here. The little snide comments, wistful thoughts that can get a person in trouble, catching up on things, travels talked about, the whole nine yards. Most of us have something like that in our lives.
The other half of Kim's immediate family was mentioned but not available. Maybe another run at them together later?
CB73 |
 eoraptor 2008-01-20 . chapter 2Well this was a fun little aside... Gwen was a goodish fit, despite my loathing of X-overs... though one might Question her marrying into the family, since she's pretty similar to Kim ;) Freud issues?
Have to admit I would have liked to see a little of Kimila and Shego's family though.
thanks for the fun. |
 Mars Project 2008-01-16 . chapter 1Gotta say you did a great job with this fic. I know you said you would explain how Kimila and Shego had their daughters in the next chapter, but would it be possible to include a bit about Rufus? Though i'm saddened by him passing on, he was a cute little guy, I wanna know how it happened. Oh another thing, I may have missed this in the story, but i'm incredibly curious as to what everyone's current age is. Since you did kinda jump at the very least like 10-15 years into the future from where we were in the last part of AiRW series.
Again great story and please for love of god don't stop writing them! |
 my gaurdian HaruHara 2008-01-03 . chapter 1AW sweetness abounds
you so overloaded me in a good way
I am so sending you my dental bill for all the cavities you gave me
now If you will excuse me I need to find som thing sad me felling this happy scares me. |
 Joe Stoppinghem 2007-12-31 . chapter 1Interesting story of an KP AU.
Nice touch of the Holidays celebration.
Good contender for the Dec. challenge.
Thanks |