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Reviews for: Ten More Things
samiseriouslyam
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
My same thoughts as on Ten Things version 1.0, but I think that you didn't do as well here. Rather than just not developing, some of the prompts seem more like summaries for a larger story than a drabble.

I'm paying speacial attention to #8, cause you said you were particularaly proud of it...and I'm sorry, but I can't see why. It doesn't make much sense. 9 is *much* much better, I think.

The other two I particularly liked were 2 and 10. Two, I thought, was about the most developed one, and they both made me laugh.

Sorry if I've offended. D:
ObsessiveCompulsive5699
2008-01-07 . chapter 1
numbers two, six, and eight were kinda funny, the rest were pretty serious, and i liked them all! seriously, i wish i could write death note things as good as you can!

obsessive
xoxoxlovestinksxoxox
2007-12-19 . chapter 1
Six was my favorite. That one was the cutest... But I love 'em all.
And I had a oneshot in mind, and was looking for someone who said they took requests in the LightxL portion of fandom, but I forget, just now, what my idea was... Gr.
Heartfelt Death
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
el oh el!
Bird_Of_Paradise
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
wow, that was good! I especially liked the last one
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