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| Yoruichi-Yoshi12 2008-01-12 ch 1,  | abuseThat was beautiful! You are awesome. |
| Bip-Bop-Boop 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseFabulous. I love the way it's put together! |
| Silver Weasley 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseOh, this was beautiful. I loved the way you wrote Molly and Mohinder and the way you transitioned from "when they were younger" to "now". It was so well-done--I love Molly and Micah, and I love the idea of them together. Wonderful, as always. |
| HeroesBonesSNPB 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseaw! that was beautiful! :D |
| snafumama 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseSuch a beautiful parable. Children, whether they have powers, or not are ripped from their childhood too soon. "Now his smile is less ready but it means more, and the comic books have been too painful to look at for years. She still rolls her eyes—girls never outgrow that..." Such a typical boy and girl required to do extraordinary and unthinkable things. I feel sorry for them. |