the ending was so sad! poor John. that was amazing it had so much emotion in it. that was great

Well, even if this is two years late-hey I just found it, cut me some slack *laugh*-I have to say that I do like the writing style. It's to the point yet has a lot of impact.

Wow, just wow. I totally did not see that one coming.

Each little snippet is a whole story in itself, and the end? Like a knife.

OK - I liked it right up until you killed the boys! But aside from that - this is the best John I've ever read. I like John Winchester and I like that you portray him as a very loving father.

CB

This was really great. It may be straight to the point as you say but the words were chosen wisely and pack alot of emotion.
Ending was well done too. Took me a second for my brain to catch up but when it did I had that sinking feeling in my heart.

*Also I really loved "It only hurts when you breathe". Wonderful piece. Another that says alot in very few words.

Wow, pretty special writing. Especially in the end, when John wakes up in a reality where he lost his entire family, so sad.

Hey, I wasn't expecting that ending! Cool twist...

Loved seeing the boys grow up through John's eyes-nice job on the POV.

Very well written fic!

That was awesome!! But the end! That came out of nowhere, I almost cried...Great job!