oh please continue this re write version, I didnt read the previous one so i dont know the story like what , so please continue this ^^

Poor Quistis...i can only imagine what she had to endure, you make it so believable and so heartbreaking that i really want to avenge her for everything that she had to go through. There have been numerous fics playing with this idea as well, but you truly manage to actually bring out her feelings and her pain, and to allow readers to really sympathise. Are you going to continue with this re-write? i really do hope so, becuase it's just really too good to leave it like this

You know, I know this piece is old, one of your firsts, well... redone, but it is so... vivid. I feel bad for not being around over the last years, but your writing is still simply amazing... I think you have grown so much since you started. This piece conveyed so much emotion without being overly descriptive, just carefully used words. The torment she went through was so real... I would have loved to see the other chapters, and maybe one day you will repost them. I hope you still write, because looking at this now I remember what an amazing talent you have.

i loved this fic before you started to rewrite it. are you going to finish the rewrite?! i want to read it over again!

-hagane no

A terrific fanfic! Was there any Sefitis? Anyway, it was really wonderful. Memories can be great yet can also be painful to recall, just as it was shown here.

hi! i love your fics! you're doin' great!

I believe that I have read this before you started rewriting it, and I really liked it. I'll keep reading this as long as you keep updating :D I have to say, your one of my fav. authors on this website!

By the way, what's up with those sisters? They umm *cough* *cough* Need HELP!

You actually made me kinda sad now...I like Quistis, she's my fave character. But, well written...nice start. As long as it's a happy ending AND a seiftis, it's alright with me. Keep it up and update fast =)

What a traumatizing fic.
Reminds me too much of the world we live in now.

Great fic anyhow.

Is there going to be another chapter to this if so please update!

This is interesting, poor Quisty. I have not read the original story, but from the reviews it sounds good. Keep writing.

Awesome revision, Al!

-Quis.

*huggles quisty* I'm so sorry :'(!! Aww I love this story, I can't wait until you finish rewriting it :)!

I can forgive you for writing this fic, but I can't forget reading it.

ITS BURNED ON MY MIND FOREVER, LOVELY LOTUS FLOWER.


YOU SUCK!

You're touching tale of (**) is so creative (CLICHE) i swooned (PUKED)

But honest to God, or Hyne, you rock. You're a role model for the valley girls of today and the gum-snapping GRAMMERIZIN' ladies of tomorrow.

Please, before you commerize, please make sure to spell-checkerize and THINKertize.

You start to many goddamn fics and DONT FINISH. SO STOP WRITING QUEEFERS, QUELPHERS, QUAFFERS, OR WHATEVER ITS CALLED!

Please, come back to Earth. We love hermaphrodites too, if they STOP MAKING TYPOS EVERY 5 SENTENCES!


Can I REALLY call ya Al? squee...that's great. *pokes ya* So we're buddies right? I'll paint your toenails while you do my hair!

Wait...that wouldn't work would it?

This is the start of something very promising.

You are growing as a writer, picking on detail and taking your time to narrate, and I look forward to seeing you tackle the difficult themes of the story with fresh experience.

It's my pleasure to beta for you. :) Get the next chapter up soon. :D