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| BlackWolfHowling 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was absoulutely PERFECT! You expertly combined all the major points of excellent writing. And your ending, the rain changing to snow right when both Holmes and Watson had reached a new point in their friendship was both perfect and beautiful. Anyone who can't appreciate that, and there's always someone, whether or not he or she cooses to say so, is an absolute fool. Again, this was an amazing story. |
| smallrose 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseAw. |
| rabidsamfan 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseAw. That's very nicely done. |
| Sderai 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseHooray for pathetic fallacy! Quite a nice little story, I must say. Well set out too, which is always a treat for the eyes. keep it up! |
| KCS 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAww! I loved it - you have great Doyle style. I like how you added just enough emotion to make it so very, very Christmasy but still kept the duo in character. Bravo! |
| WriterofStrangeThings 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. You appeared to have kept everyone in character, too. ~Kyla |
| Pudupudu 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseGah, I LOVE it! I melted with the snow line, and the hand holding! I'm glad Holmes managed to make Watson feel better! They're so in character! And... [Get your violins out moment] this is my first Christmas without my mum and gran so I can sympathise with Watson [put violins away]. Write more (says the person who doesn't update for months). Do as I say, not as I do :-P |
| Susicar 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseSad, sad and well done. A very "study in character" on Holmes and Watson. Thank for sharing. And Merry Christmas!! |
| MoonlitPuddle 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseAh. ^_^ It doesn't matter if this isn't in Doyle's style, this is still a wonderful little story. It's sweet without being soppy. Mae carnen. ^_^ |
| Werewolf Master 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseAww, that's so sweet ^^ How very Christmas-esque. |
| VHunter07 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseBravo! That was wonderful! You know, I wrote something alot like this, except it was the other way around...but it won't really make any sense until I've posted my next story, lol. But this is great! You've done a marvelous job of showing the depth of their friendship without making them mushy. *sniff* It's lovely! Thanks so much & Merry Christmas! |
| kris 2007-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abusebeautifull! |