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LiliNeko
2008-01-19 . chapter 4
Lol, ok in the last review I just remembered that I didn't name the pokemon that I knew you were getting ahaha -nervous laugh ...Kay you might think I cheated but meh, its a dratini, I think that's how you spell it xD

Haha they wake up to talk for about 5 mins and then fell asleep xD Aww' niffy necklace, a pink dratini?!

AHAHAHA, a picture does last longer!

OH MERRY LATE XMAS, and just for the hell of it, HAPPY LATE NEW YEARS! HAHA XD ok I think I need sleep but I can't! Still gotta read more chappies, damn keep on getting side track xD well see ya in the next one of troc! Ta-ta for now!

Lili Neko =^-^=
LiliNeko
2008-01-19 . chapter 3
You know, after i hit the submit button I REMEMBERED the pokemon =__= a ...

Hah, I can see chase is gonna be making those fashionable late entrance xD Heh, Mrs.Master is a bit pushy for her 10 year daughter to be on a date now is she?

Lol, chase disappeared when Adam turned around xD LOL at leta ditching ryan like that xD ITS BATTLING time, kekeke xD

NOW ITS DANCING TIME ^_^ WAIT, now it's the "THIRD DEGREE" from Mr. Master and a THREAT from MRS. Master lol ^^

WHOA, THE "L" WORD already, lol xD **HEART-HEART-HEART**

That was a cute chappy my friend! Wee-ee-ee next chappie! Ta-ta for now!

Lili Neko =^-^=
LiliNeko
2008-01-19 . chapter 2
Oh oh oh oh oh oh o hoh oh I know what the gift for leta already, kekeke xD

Oh a green dress eh? Ryan, haha annoying blond too ;p Surprise in planning wwee-ee-ee-ee!

Lol, it just kinda funny to hear that Chase is still looking for the "gift" and how you keep on going back and forth, making it sound like he's "lost" xD

AHAHA Ryan and Leta bickering was great, man ryan is like dense, kinda like ash xD Oh snap speaking of ash, he's still there! Haha and back to chase, oh snap he caught it! YAY! But to be honest, I don't remember what it was called, lol xD

NEXT one! Ta-ta for now!

Lili Neko =^-^=
LiliNeko
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Haha so is Rya staying at the Oaks? HAha Misty and Rya teaming up, kekeke xD

Damn you chase I just found out from you that you got your first review on troc...gr...lol xD

Lol, on Gary pointing out about Rya, hahaha xD Buwhahah PWN'D and TOLD by shadow, "well, uh, DUH" hahahahaha xD

Hahah Rya got busted and Misty trying to get out of it, hahaa xD

WHO0o0o0o0oA! Is that Ash I see there?! Lol, I haven't seen that loser in awhile xD Hahah and Gary and his "real mans club" Ah' Misty calling, kekeke love her ^^

Wee-ee-e-e-e-e-e-e- finally reviewed the first chappie xD on to the next one yay! Ta-ta for now ^_^

Lili Neko =^-^=
Admiral Blake V. Wilson
2007-12-28 . chapter 4
YES! I'm so happy I could choke!! *rethinks* um, nevermind. But I am glad to finally see the two of them together! Great story, man. Can't wait for the next installment.
Keep up the good work,
Blake
Latias 24
2007-12-26 . chapter 3
This chapter is a good one. I like the last sentence!
ZooTycoon223
2007-12-25 . chapter 4
YAY YOU!
Fortune Maiden
2007-12-25 . chapter 4
Lol this was good and funny. I liked how Sunny curled up with Shadow. And how Adam spied on Leta and Chase. Reminds me of Atticus from GX. (Do you watch it?)

Well post your new fic up soon please
Cem-chan
2007-12-25 . chapter 4
So this is how it ends huh? I like it how Adam sneaked up on them like that. A pink Dratini? Is that the shiny? No wait the shiny is green isn't it. Either way sounds so CUTE!

Will there be more Eon love in Return of Chase? I really can't wait for that. (Oh and if need any Ocs anywhere...)

Well update soon. ♥
ChaseVoid
2007-12-25 . chapter 4
Waa, we the magic of Christmas.
I want that pink Dratini >,< *sneaks into the house to steal but gets lost in the hallway*

LOL, damn, Adam trying to pull Leta's leg, but totally Chase is all being cool. Hehe, misty's so gonna have a knack out of it, and for sure Gary's gonna be be all knowing, hehe

Just loved the ending, and se I told you Rayn was a good guy :P
ChaseVoid
2007-12-24 . chapter 3
IT'S ABOUT TIME FREAKING TIME YOU TWO! LOL, haha so ture, =_= they should have just kissed on the dance floor, lol. but this classic misletoe is the best.

In this whole chapter I loved this line the most -> "Odd, I thought it was always the dads that did the threatening" haha, it was hilarious.

Aww, I thought that Ryan was a nice guy too, I pity him T.T
CrystalMask
2007-12-24 . chapter 3
i don't have the time to sign in so i'll do an anonymous review! yes, as adam said: FINALLY!! And u used my song, gasp! I'm in love with that song! hahaha that greedy weenie sure got his huh? And i can't wait until chase and leta exchange gifts!! Wait a second... you haven't given me anything! I HATE YOU! hahahaha just kidding, gasp i have to get ready for tonigh so i must leave ! Update soon!

farewell my foolish underling (yes u are my underling mwahahahahahahahhahahah)

p.s. merry christmas!
Cem-chan
2007-12-24 . chapter 3
Yeah the dad is supposed to be more threatening. And Adam should be more careful when planning surprises. AND OMG THEY KISSED!

I don't like Ryan. And why do I get that feeling he'll be in johto trying to win her over?

Yaknow Shadowball is a ghost move so it shouldn't have affected Eevee.Is Nog's death ball special? And how come none of the other Eons are ever mentioned anymore? I thought there'd at least be some Eon love like in The annoying Jolteon fics.(And of course between Shadow and Sunlight from Aquamarine)
Cem-chan
2007-12-22 . chapter 2
whew I finally finished it. I had some trouble reading this fic at home (cousin's house hee hee)(Its his B-day)(Actually it was yesterday but we're celebrating today)

Anyway I like this. Ryan sounds familiar. So Leta is rich huh? Never knew that. Oh and Chase was in the Dragon Den right? And I'd say he caught a dratini but I know you better than that. (Unless you suddenly remembered midfiction nightmare)

Is it Latios? (Well she has a latias so...)

Well I better submit before my friend bited my head off so update soon bye
Felix the Eeveetrainer
2007-12-22 . chapter 1
Yay! Sequel! Looks just as good as the first one.Everyopne is using my ideas before me, whether it be Latias eggs, Eevee trainers or Nasty experiments. (Its me, Espeons Friend. I now have a story-You are a class author, please review mine!)

It's called Capture a dark experiment. But really, yours rocks!

When is Chase going to catch a Leafeon or a Glaceon?- or maybe some new Eeveelution that yuo just made up
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