 Kharina 2008-02-15 . chapter 1That was really good! I especially loved Ariana, and nice twist on the way Grindelwald and Albus meet. Who'd have thought that so much could happen because of carrot cake?
I liked the little Life and Lies touches, too. |
 Rovinierre 2007-12-20 . chapter 1Great! I really liked it. :) (I liked how you put Ariana drawing in it, as well. Reminds me of Life and Lies). Definitely going into my favourites! |
 Emily92 2007-12-20 . chapter 1This was nice. I liked how descriptive it was; the emotion of both Ariana and Albus was so real. The ending was cool, I'm really starting to like the idea of Albus/Gellert. |
 Hannah 2007-12-20 . chapter 1 Cute little piece. Is it a one-shot or are you writing a sequel? |