yay, hyuugas! Okay, no. But yay for hinata, hanabi, and neji. I like the dynamics of their relationships. Maybe I should read more hinata.)

AW!

THIS IS TOO CUTE!

I LOVE WHAT HINATA DID TO HIASHI!

Aww, thats so cute. You should write more stories like this.

That was brill. I love the fact that Hinata stood up to her father for her sisters sake and that Neji did get up at an ungodly hour for Hanabi.

I also love the timing that I stummbled on this fic. My older sister is 5 months full of baby and it's a girl :D

Two reasons to love the fic _

Jessica

i wan more XD any sequel? got sequel rmb to tell me 'kay hehes a story of hina, a girl who is a double firework XD (i think hanabi means firecracker)

I love this fanfic, you should do a sequal of it when the baby is born and how or what she grows up to be.

loved it

Well. I don't know if Hiashi is that bad. I mean I know he was too tough on Hinata, but after the Chunin exams he seems to want to be better. Though he'd still probably be mad if Hanabi got pregnant.
Hanabi that crazy was a bit weird... but since she's such a minor character I guess there's a lot to do with her. I still wonder what happened to the father.

I'm amazed at the wonderful description in this one. It flows so nicely

this made me angry, happy and curious as to who the father is
it's a good story that probably deserves more reviews

Spectacular. Your descriptions can't be called anything but beautiful.

Having a baby is always something good... but the circumstances may not be. By now I guess she have already told her family.

I liked the change. You're so damn good writing about anyone. Their personalities are pretty nice, and I loved the bits of humor among all the angstyness (don't know if that word exists).

You should really try writing some GaaraxHinata as you mantioned somewhere in an a/n.

A very good story. Actually, I strongly despise angsty/hurt fics (they're fun to write but pain to read), but this one was different. I really liked it, and I hope to read more from you.

That was really good. Oh, and wish your cousin well.

And yes, I AM temporarily in shock because I couldn't find a single 'Shikamaru' or 'Temari' in the whole story. It's a nice change, though, and you grasp their personalities almost as well as you do your normal characters.

Sorry if I can't really understand what you meant when you described how Hinata felt, since I've never had anybody tell me they're pregnant. But you try, and hopefully-or maybe not hopefully, depending on how you look at it-I'll get what you mean.
In the meantime, it's good to see that you're branching out a little. And seriously, you ARE good at writing about anyone. As someone who is constantly plauged by selective writer's block, I'll take off my hat to you.
Anyway, good job, and looking forwards to the next one.