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Twentysix26
2008-07-21 . chapter 8
Damn, I was going through my alerts(had 300) on a deleting rampage and saw this, so i reread it, and oh my god! This is awesome! Definatly staying even if you don't ever update, I'll just keep hopeing.

~TwentySix26
Traci Miller
2007-12-27 . chapter 1
I is finally here to review! :) I love this fanpoem series. It's awesome and I love the way that you portray Shirosaki as the one that has to keep them both sane. I love how he tells Ichigo whatever he needs to hear. Not that that means he wouldn't mean it. But, it's a new caring side to Shirosaki, since most people seem to like writing him as the type that would just laugh at Ichigo and try to make it worse.

The way you write Shirosaki for these fanpoems is very refreshing and interesting. I also like the way you portray Ichigo, as well. I like that he doesn't DIE, per se (unless I've forgotten something), but that he instead is simply mentally unstable (not that there's ever a "simply" about that...oo; ).

Anyway, that's why I like these. My favorites are all the ones that involve Ichigo and Shirosaki both, my absolute favorite is the one that involves Ichigo dressing up in front of a mirror and asking Shirosaki if he was pretty and such things. I especially like Shirosaki's answer of "Pretty as a penny."

I don't think I play Shirosaki as well in our role plays as you portray in him in this fanpoem thing. ;_;

Anyways, please continue! They are awesome in my book! And I'm sorry this thing is so freakin long! O.o;
demonlifehealer
2007-12-25 . chapter 8
That was so depressing...Though I hope it works out for Hichigo! Can't wait till you update!
Nakimochiku
2007-12-21 . chapter 8
oh wow. *shocked* that was absolutely stunning! o m g! so wonderful, i love i love! please, continue this, make me happy!
Nakimochiku
2007-12-21 . chapter 6
hee hee! that one was absolutely sweet! (throws away jeely bean cuz she gots a tooth ache) hee. yea i definitely loved it.
Nakimochiku
2007-12-21 . chapter 5
heh. seems so sweet. yet so sad because it hurts hichichi to say those things. not because of what it means, but why ichi-kun is asking.
Nakimochiku
2007-12-21 . chapter 4
i don't really know what to say to this one. hee hee, sometimes i really like seeing ichi-kun as the crazy one.
Nakimochiku
2007-12-21 . chapter 3
cry... seems so sad. is ichi-kun a pyro? this one was in a different style than the other. and i liked it very very much!
Nakimochiku
2007-12-21 . chapter 2
he is he talking about a highschool year book or something? i don't get it...it's a nice poem, and i don't mean to sound mean, but here's my suggestion, change the style of each poem you write here. it'd definitely make things interesting.
Kyra Windwood
2007-12-20 . chapter 8
being gay is not a sin (wacks ichigo on the head) so stop being emo
aKaKitsuneKK
2007-12-19 . chapter 8
This one felt so...desperate...it touched me...really...
You know, homophobia is even worse in United States than where I live! (I live in Quebec.) I heard in USA a girl just go and hug another girl and gets rejected for it. Here you just have to go in a high school before the classes begin and you see gangs of girls hugging around and kissing each others on the cheaks and calling each other honey, and they're hetero! You know, my best friend asks me everyday if I love her, and that girl is one of the most popular amongst all at her school, and she gets a new boyfriend every week, and she gets to ask her friends if they love her anyway. Yeah, personnally I prefer boys, yeah I'm hetero, and are homosexuals mean with me 'bout it? NO! So why should I be mean to them because of that? HOMOPHOBIA IS GAY! BEING GAY IS NOT A SIN! Proof that homosexuality exists in nature: MY CAT IS A MALE AND HE'S GAY AND HE ACTS LIKE A FEMALE IN HEAT! AND WHAT? HE'S CUTE ANYWAY! ... Maybe I should calm myself down... this is a review... O/O Sorry but this makes me mad when I think of homophobe people. I don't understand them. (and they probably don't understand me either.)
KK~
aKaKitsuneKK
2007-12-19 . chapter 7
Eh eh! Cute! Ichigo waiting for night to come to see Hichigo!
Hey, you know, if you really complete the whole alphabet, you'll get 26 reviews from me! XD
KK~
aKaKitsuneKK
2007-12-19 . chapter 6
Oh gosh! This one was so real!
It just sounded so lovely!
aKaKitsuneKK
2007-12-19 . chapter 5
Oh gosh!
It's so..so..so...dunno...UGH! I LOVE IT! I'm just in love with your fics!
KK~
(I just realised 2 of my reviews were missing a part!)
VietShinigami
2007-12-19 . chapter 8
These are cool! ^^
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