totally cute story. I love me some KaLuluness. ^^

nice...love it...more spice...then some sugar and salty tears...(how would it taste?)...pls update...T_T

Awesomeness!

I do feel for Shirley though. I honestly believe she deserved to be with Lulu. But as Kallen is my second choice, this story is gold.

It took me a minute to follow the strange quote structure here. But for some reason, it works surprisingly well.

I can't wait to see what happens next. And I hope Shirley gets something out of this whole ordeal.

I kinda like this, next time I'll give u a great review, ok? :D

i think that it was lelouchs plot to get kallen to kiss him and it was either arthur w/ the helmet or CC in the whole outfit

plz update soon tho

good job on the first chap.

it is a good idea, and there are few grammar or spelling mistakes but there is one painfully obvious reoccurrence that is quite aggravating as a reader. You often open and close at least three quotes in one paragraph. Just because there is a pause or a sentence ends does not mean that you need to start a new quote. It makes ones eyes hurt while reading it, and it is a bit harder to follow than if it were not like that.

other than that, you are good to go. Keep up the good work!

I love it! Its worth reading!

om gosh i love the fricken hell of it its so adorible balanced yet a perfect blend of LxK

100 thumbs up ^ ~Needa Freeda

Sadly, the "blue button" is now green and says "Review this story/chapter". But I still pressed it!

I REALLY like this story! It is great to find one that has the two double lives and even more interesting the psychological aspect of it. Even though she is kissing the same guy, in her mind, they are different. At the same time, having a relationship between Lulu and Statfeld, Zero and Kozuki makes this an amazing story in my opinion. I am really looking forward to the next chapter!

great story u culd make lulu and kallen do some more teen things

would that be C.C in disguise? lol.. love the drama & can't wait to see what else you have planned.

I have one word for this story: Brilliant. I love Lelouch's POV, due to the fact that he already knows about Kallen's double life, where as she does not. He keep toying with her mind, which is really amusing, and the fact that she's completely confused seems to be all part of Lelouch's, once again, complex plan. Hope to see an update soon!

BTW, you have a great knack for make-out scenes ;) too many fanfic writers have it happen at random - it's all the little details that make the reader suddenly realize they're leaning towards the screen! Love it, keep it up!

(also, just a critisism: most of the time you use a semicolon when you can just use another comma. I find it makes me pause in awkward places and I'm pretty sure that's not the effect you were going for :/ other than that, good job :) )

they are so cute together.

a... very.. "interesting" format to write in... but not exactly... effective in presenting your story/idea. I think the dialogue should be integrated a bit more fluidly with the rest of the text for a easier read and transition. That's what i think should be worked on the most, otherwise, it's really good.