Great story so far. I like the way you have written it from Tawny POV. Wish you would finish it.

Great story so far. I like the way you have written it from Tawny's POV. Wish you would finish it.

Hmm. I've got my intrest peaked. Putting you on alerts should you decide to add more later.

Good start, please update and lets see what happens! )

You've got a great start here and I'm excited to see what comes next! Tawny was my favorite character on that show (she reminded me a lot of one of my buds), I'm glad to see someone writing another story from her POV. Keep up the good work.

I don't think it was that bad in fact I really enjoyed it. Update soon!

It totally did not suck. I've just recently gotten into reading this particular fandom *I'm really late..I know...* and I'm thirsty for more great fics. I'm looking forward to this one.

Doesn't suck at all. Yet.

Keep writing, we'll see whether it starts.

And don't get discouraged by the scarce reviews, this is pretty much a dead fandom. But that means the readers you do get will be good ones.

It didn't suck! Anything but! ) It was great and I loved it! I'm actually surprised to see another ES fic. And *since I'm hoping this is an RxT* another RxT out there! It's rare, nowadays. P

But, yeah, I'm liking it. And I'm definitely looking forward to what's going to happen! You've got my attention! So make sure to keep me occupied! P Update and whatnot.

Though that's kind of the pot calling the kettle black, there. P

But, yeah. Looking forward to updates! D Consider yourself story alerted! P

Great start. I hope you update soon!

Hey, this is off to a great start! I started my last story off with a similar premise, Tawny joining the paper and having to work with Ren, anyway. Similarities probably end there. Anyway, I hope to see more soon. It's sad how dead the ES page has been lately.

I hope to see an update soon!

dude u gotta pms i'm lovin this story it's really good